WEDNESDAY
I arrived at (tower) atmeller tower.(, only missing) First I walked up the mountains to reach the burriac castle. I had dinner at nine o’clock and I started going up. At halfway, I asked: What time is it? Richard, one teacher. He replied: It’s midnight!!! When I went (go) to the forest, I listened a wolf. But it wasn’t (isn’t) a wolf, it(‘s) was a wild boar!! Runing and runing to one cave in the track. When the sun was (is) in the sky, I continued.
THURSDAY
(Were) It was half past ten, we arrived at burriac castle. In the castle, (have) there was an old man, he was wearing a cloak and he was very pale. My first conclusion, he was the count dracula! But I realized than it was day. He was the owner of the castle, he offerred (a) some rooms. In the night, (listened) Richard and (me) I listened a noise. I went upstairs (up) and (looking) looked at everywhere, it(‘s) was a surprise! It(‘s) was Fernando, the owner of the castle, eating (a) people!!
FRIDAY
At dawn, Richard and (me) I went to the Sabadell. But a halfway, we (see) saw (a) Fernando and a big ghost. Marius our friend horse appeared (a Marius, we horse friend) Fernando and a big ghost dissappeared very fast. Marius and we went to (a) Sabadell. We thank you and we arrived at the school. This is my experience of the burriac horror castle! It’s a terrorific and horrible story!!