When I’m older, I (wont) want to be a (Designer) Fashion Designer, because I like to draw and I am charmed with going dressed well, and I would like to design my own (proper) clothes and (her(it) of the others) also for the others.
I (wont) want to visit England for curiosity and for the statue of the Freedom.
My favorite subjects at school are (Natives, Tegnologia) Nature, Tecnology, Art and English.
Sorry but the Freedom Statue is not in England. It is in New York (USA)
Your mark is GOOD