When I’m older ,I want to be a doctor because I like children(s) and medicine. I want to visit London because I want to learn English and know the city , also I like(d ) to visit Egypt to know the piramydes and Italy because I like(d) pasta and ice cream. My favourite subject are English, Nature, History and Catalan.
VERY GOOD. Children is a plural word, then it doesn’t need “S”. Why Nature, History and Catalan are your favourite subjects ?