When (I was young I wanted) I’m older I want to be an engineer because I like (a) cards and (I a) games. I want to visit London. I want to see wild animals (in London there aren’t any wild animals) and people(s). My favourites subjects at school are Maths and English. I liked these subjects because it made me think.
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No pots explicar que t’agradava ser quan eres jove (when I was young) sino que vols ser quan siguis gran (when I’m older). Has d’utilitzar els verbs en present i no en passat (liked). La darrera frase (I liked these subjects because it made me think) està copiada.
GOOD però molt justet.
Ho sento Ricard em vaig equibocar posant-lo.
Però Ricard aquest no és el que tenia bé per el lloc de la ubicació era l’altre.
Vols dir que vas fer un segon article i que aquest no és el bo ?