Monday:
I Walked to the Torre Eiffel, I stopped in the shops, and I noticed an enormous shop.
Tuesday:
I was very hungry, and I stayed at the Torre Eiffel.
Wednesday:
I Walked in the Torre Eiffel again, I looked for a hotel evrywhere.
Thursday:
I went to a very big park near the hotel.
Friday:
I Talked to guide about the very beautiful mountains.
By Omar
Com sempre vas massa depressa i això et fa fer massa errades. Ho pots fer millor. Good
A més és un article sense títol.
Com sempre vas massa depressa i fas molts errors.
I tots els treballs t’has d’acostumar a que tinguin un títol. Això ja ho saps, és clar 😉