I look at the sky,
I see snowflakes fly,
Suddenly I know,
I won’t let you go.
Everybody loves you,
Including me too,
And I really can see,
That together we can be free.
I can hear a thing,
A big bell ring,
Now listen to the angel’s song,
And nothing will go wrong.
Tonight I will give you something,
Don’t worry because it’s a good thing!
I’ll give you this,
A good nights kiss!
By Emma Guillem
Emma that’s a fantastic poem! I fell in love with your poem while I was reading it. It seems that winter is a season to enjoy and be happy. It is so difficult to write such beautiful poem which also makes sense. Spectacular. I hope that one day I can make a beautiful poem like this one!
Emma Guillem,I think your poem is very nice and I think you always make a lot of effort and I am amazed because it was very difficult to write that poem.
Great poem Emma!
Wow! Emma what an amazing poem! When I read it, it made me smile. I think you’ve put in alot of effort and tried hard to write this poem. I am sure that whoever reads this will love it! I promise.
I think that this is a fantastic poem too! Well done Emma and well done to all of my class for trying so hard in this exercise. It’s not always easy to find words that rhyme but I think that you all did a great job 🙂