Famous people in the 60s and 70s

Here are the presentations we made. Can you correct the grammar errors? Can you make comments about them?

24 thoughts on “Famous people in the 60s and 70s

  1. Damaris Vallejo

    The presentation is from Kevin Munoz on Neil Armstrong.
    He says “he spoke” and would be better “he said”

  2. Damaris Vallejo

    The presentation is from Kevin Munoz on Martin Luter.
    The word “activitsm” don’t exist

  3. Karen Solorzano

    The presentation is from Kevin Munoz on Marilyn Monroe.
    It might say something of earrings

  4. Damaris Vallejo

    The presentation is from Carlos and Cristian on Michael.
    They say “jacket” and would be better “leather jacket”

  5. Karen Solorzano

    The presentation is from Carlos and Cristian on Michael.
    They say that Michael died in 1958 when he died in 2009

  6. Karen Solorzano

    The presentation is from Carlos and Cristian on Madona.
    They say if they like it or not.

  7. Damaris Vallejo

    The presentation is from Marina on Elvis Presley.
    She says “your” when serious “ his”

  8. Damaris Vallejo

    The presentation is from Jessi and Lua on Elizabeth Tailor.
    They say “best white” when it should be “white dress”

  9. Karen Solorzano

    The presentation is from Jessi and Lua on Elizabeth Tailor.
    They say “we don’t” when serious “we don’t like”

  10. Damaris Vallejo

    The presentation is from Jessi and Lua on Frank Sinatra.
    They have not put the pronoun

  11. Karen Solorzano

    The presentation is from Jessi and Lua on Frank Sinatra.
    The pronoun is male not female

  12. Damaris Vallejo

    The presentation is from Jessi and Lua on Rocio Durcal.
    They say “it is not” when serious ” we don’t like”

  13. RICARDO TORRES

    In the presentation of angela in Manolo Santana.
    Lacks the determinant “He” at the beginning of the sentence

  14. Donka007:)

    This presentation is great. Really like it because it is fantastically made.
    kisses and greetings Donka ~c:

  15. Patrishia ;)

    Presentations are cool. There are many photos. Presentations are short, but concise.

  16. Anetta:)

    All presentations are short and very well. Although there is some questions. In the presentation of Karen is cool, but do not know what’s going on with this reply: I do now, now do not becouse him. So what?

  17. Paul

    These presentations are very cool. Here is a lot of informations and pictures about famous people. You have found mistakes and I don’t see more.

  18. Aleksandra Z.

    In the presentation of Estuardo and Cristobal it will be better to say “The Beatles had four members” than “…were four…”

  19. Rosalie

    Presentations are great. in my opinion the best is first made by Kevin and the one about Black Sabbath Group. there are many informations and a great graphics:)

  20. Magdalen

    Presentations are great. There are very cool photos.
    Some answers for question “Do you like her/him?” are odd.
    The best presentation is presentation by Kevin.

  21. Kinia

    Presentations are great. But why are there so many question marks and empty spaces?

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