Look on your student’s book and workbook at the writing section and post a text on one of the topics proposed.
6 thoughts on “unit 8: writing: an opinion essay 2”
Eloi Gonzalez Castro
So, let’s criticize de fast food!
Easy, like doing a critical of the tobacco.
Well, normally I don’t go to have a lunch or dinner there, only when I want to go out and I don’t have too much money: that’s what causes its popularity between the young people, because we can buy cheap food, for me, not with a good taste, and it makes us be sated because of its fat and oils. Really, we have nothing eaten, the only thing that we eat is oil, if I count all, that I have eaten, it’s nothing, it’s incomprehensible how can I be satisfied.
So the companies don’t mind about our health, and they take advantage of the situation of many people. Who cares millions of fatty young girls and boys?
So I prefer become fat because the food of my grandma, than wasting my money in eat oily cardboard. They use to mask their unhealthy food with happy advertisements and fit people, running and smiling all the time like a fool, while they’re eating a hamburger. Mmm! Tasty… for the companies pocket. All, hypocrisy, trying to invent a new reality hiding all the heart problems, the obesity, the interests over the people, and the money over all of us.
Every time that I criticize something with a relation with the society, I became a little bit sad, always like only an object, not a person, what a coincidence… but who cares! I know that I’m a person, that’s enough!
So, don’t be sad Maribel! God be withy ye and shaving the queen!
Laura Rodríguez Bernabé
Hello Maribel,
Here’s my opinion essay about “banning smoking”.
Nowadays, In spain the government has banned smoking in some areas like hospitals, pubs, restaurants, schools and parks. In my opinion I think that the governments should ban smoking everywhere.
But I think people shouldn’t smoke anywhere, because everytime you go to school there are people smoking in front of it, and it is a bad example for the children. As well as some people don’t follow the rules and they do what they want, so government should be more strict with the new law.
From my point of view, smoking is unhealthy and the smoke can provoke illnesses. For this reason, the government has increased the cigarrettes’ price. Personally, I think that people are smoking more and more everyday.
In addition, if people didn’t smoke so much, they would feel better and they would be more healthy. In conclusion, the government should declare tobacoo illegal worldwite.
Elena Campos
The Government Should smoking ban.
Nowadays, Many people smoke in many places is in the middle of the street or in public places.
Just take a lei liugares banning smoking in public or near to smoke have to be about 50 meters from the place especially if they are hospitals or schools.
In my wiew both the Governor should be prohibited completely, but if you quit smoking in the street because the cigarette or cigar smoke bothers people that get long around the smoke.
In conclusion, both the Governor should ban smoking in all places least for smoking people could only smoke in their homes.
Neus olalla
The children are learning to cook healtily should be a compulsory subject in schools because in this moment there are a lot persons that eat a fast food because don’t knows cooking and this leads to serious health problems .
In the first I tink that tne children are learning to cook healtily, to avoid health problems, including obesity.
In the second the children are learning cook, because in this moment there are a more people that don’t knows cooking and this is dedicated to eating fast food, if teach children to be able to cook themselves and not eating fast food.
And the last I tink that in the school the tachers should teach their students what are the consequences of fast food
Alba Flo Ventayol
There are many countries that every day eats on Mc’Donalds, or Burger King…, overcoat in america of the north. Nowadays, Catalunya is taking example of EEUU, and the catalan people are starting eating fast food every day. The advertising has influenced a lot in our society and has incited the people to eat fast food.
As a result, a lot of people have problems with their health because they eat fast food and they don’t do enough exercise.
European governments have already banned TV advertising for fast food, and this is a good idea in my opinion, because a lot of parents feed his children of a fast food restaurant, and then these children will have problems of overweight and bad habits. I think that the people would go to a fast food restaurant once a month, and in my view they’d have to do exercise twice a week, more or less.
In addition, the European governments should definetly ban advertising for fast food on TV because this advertising often gives us the idea that somethin’s healthy when it isn’t.
I think that the government must take further steps to eliminate the fast food advertising and encourage the healthy food.
I conclusion, I would like that the people thinks more in their health, and do more exercise because stay at house looking at the PC or playing games all day, and then go out and have dinner in a fast food restaurant is very unhealhty. They may go with heir friends to the park, or have dinner in a healthy restaurants because it should be the perfect balance.
Alicia Robles Indiano
Hello Maribel!
Nowadays, the government has taken measure before this situation, because in the country more than the persons half they smoke.
Here in Spain the government prohibit to smoke in public places: bars, restaurants, to certain meters of the school.
All that has been done by the intention of people stop smoking and in order that it doesn’t affect other persons.
In my view, I find well that all is prohibited, since I don’t smoke and I can’t stand very much the smell. Also I see well because before you were going some place, for example to a restaurant and you were eating with smokers to the side.
Also it is necessary to say that all the smokers are in against and also I understand it because for them it is a custom and in addition they need.
In conclusion I agree with what it has done the government, because this way it doesn’t affect other persons who don’t want to smoke.
So, let’s criticize de fast food!
Easy, like doing a critical of the tobacco.
Well, normally I don’t go to have a lunch or dinner there, only when I want to go out and I don’t have too much money: that’s what causes its popularity between the young people, because we can buy cheap food, for me, not with a good taste, and it makes us be sated because of its fat and oils. Really, we have nothing eaten, the only thing that we eat is oil, if I count all, that I have eaten, it’s nothing, it’s incomprehensible how can I be satisfied.
So the companies don’t mind about our health, and they take advantage of the situation of many people. Who cares millions of fatty young girls and boys?
So I prefer become fat because the food of my grandma, than wasting my money in eat oily cardboard. They use to mask their unhealthy food with happy advertisements and fit people, running and smiling all the time like a fool, while they’re eating a hamburger. Mmm! Tasty… for the companies pocket. All, hypocrisy, trying to invent a new reality hiding all the heart problems, the obesity, the interests over the people, and the money over all of us.
Every time that I criticize something with a relation with the society, I became a little bit sad, always like only an object, not a person, what a coincidence… but who cares! I know that I’m a person, that’s enough!
So, don’t be sad Maribel! God be withy ye and shaving the queen!
Hello Maribel,
Here’s my opinion essay about “banning smoking”.
Nowadays, In spain the government has banned smoking in some areas like hospitals, pubs, restaurants, schools and parks. In my opinion I think that the governments should ban smoking everywhere.
But I think people shouldn’t smoke anywhere, because everytime you go to school there are people smoking in front of it, and it is a bad example for the children. As well as some people don’t follow the rules and they do what they want, so government should be more strict with the new law.
From my point of view, smoking is unhealthy and the smoke can provoke illnesses. For this reason, the government has increased the cigarrettes’ price. Personally, I think that people are smoking more and more everyday.
In addition, if people didn’t smoke so much, they would feel better and they would be more healthy. In conclusion, the government should declare tobacoo illegal worldwite.
The Government Should smoking ban.
Nowadays, Many people smoke in many places is in the middle of the street or in public places.
Just take a lei liugares banning smoking in public or near to smoke have to be about 50 meters from the place especially if they are hospitals or schools.
In my wiew both the Governor should be prohibited completely, but if you quit smoking in the street because the cigarette or cigar smoke bothers people that get long around the smoke.
In conclusion, both the Governor should ban smoking in all places least for smoking people could only smoke in their homes.
The children are learning to cook healtily should be a compulsory subject in schools because in this moment there are a lot persons that eat a fast food because don’t knows cooking and this leads to serious health problems .
In the first I tink that tne children are learning to cook healtily, to avoid health problems, including obesity.
In the second the children are learning cook, because in this moment there are a more people that don’t knows cooking and this is dedicated to eating fast food, if teach children to be able to cook themselves and not eating fast food.
And the last I tink that in the school the tachers should teach their students what are the consequences of fast food
There are many countries that every day eats on Mc’Donalds, or Burger King…, overcoat in america of the north. Nowadays, Catalunya is taking example of EEUU, and the catalan people are starting eating fast food every day. The advertising has influenced a lot in our society and has incited the people to eat fast food.
As a result, a lot of people have problems with their health because they eat fast food and they don’t do enough exercise.
European governments have already banned TV advertising for fast food, and this is a good idea in my opinion, because a lot of parents feed his children of a fast food restaurant, and then these children will have problems of overweight and bad habits. I think that the people would go to a fast food restaurant once a month, and in my view they’d have to do exercise twice a week, more or less.
In addition, the European governments should definetly ban advertising for fast food on TV because this advertising often gives us the idea that somethin’s healthy when it isn’t.
I think that the government must take further steps to eliminate the fast food advertising and encourage the healthy food.
I conclusion, I would like that the people thinks more in their health, and do more exercise because stay at house looking at the PC or playing games all day, and then go out and have dinner in a fast food restaurant is very unhealhty. They may go with heir friends to the park, or have dinner in a healthy restaurants because it should be the perfect balance.
Hello Maribel!
Nowadays, the government has taken measure before this situation, because in the country more than the persons half they smoke.
Here in Spain the government prohibit to smoke in public places: bars, restaurants, to certain meters of the school.
All that has been done by the intention of people stop smoking and in order that it doesn’t affect other persons.
In my view, I find well that all is prohibited, since I don’t smoke and I can’t stand very much the smell. Also I see well because before you were going some place, for example to a restaurant and you were eating with smokers to the side.
Also it is necessary to say that all the smokers are in against and also I understand it because for them it is a custom and in addition they need.
In conclusion I agree with what it has done the government, because this way it doesn’t affect other persons who don’t want to smoke.
bye!