As it is suggested on your textbook, write a description of a person. To make things easier, please, write about someone everybody knows, for example, a famous person or someone from our class or school… Check on the book for tips and specific vocabulary.
Helloooo Maribeeeeeeeeeeeel!!!
I’m going to describe Alba Flo, my best friend since I was 3 years!
Well, she is 16 years old.She’s got straight, long and blonde hair. She’s tall and very slim!!!She has very nice green eyes, and a little mouth.
She is very talkitive person,generous,cheerful and very confident about her self!
She likes listening music and play in the theatre.
We really enjoy every moment that we are together!
We have very differences but we have a very nice relation and this is the most importan thing!
Well, i have to go to the bed because it’s late!
you see tomorrow
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Helloooo Maribeeeeeeeeeeeel!!!
I’m going to describe Alba Flo, my best friend since I was 3 years OLD!
Well, she is 16 years old.She’s got straight, long and blonde hair. She’s tall and very slim!!!She has very nice green eyes, and a little mouth.
She is A very talkitive person,generous,cheerful and very confident about herself!
She likes listening TO music and playING theatre.
We really enjoy every moment that we are together!
We have MANY differences but we have a very nice relationSHIP and this is the most importanT thing!
Well, I have to go to the bed because it’s late!
you see tomorrow
good night!
good night!
THANKS FOR YOUR DESCRIPTION, CARLA. KEEP ON PRACTISING.
Hello Maribel!
I will describe Mireia Ribas, she is a person very important in my life. She’s seventeen years old, but I know her since the nursery. She always has been one of my best friends and we always have been together.
She is of an average stature and thin, she has blue eyes, blond and curly hair. Always this one smiling and I like his laugh.
Mireia isn’t confident in some situations, she is very impatient and talkative. She’s very good friend, when I need help she gives me an advice. His favorite sport is swimming and volley-ball.
Mireia and I are very different, we get on really well.
Bye teacher!
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Hello Maribel!
I will describe Mireia Ribas, she is a
personvery important PERSON in my life. She’s seventeen years old, but I know her since the nursery SCHOOL. She HAS alwayshasbeen one of my best friends and wealwayshave ALWAYS been together.She is of an average HEIGHT and thin, she has blue eyes, blond and curly hair. SHE’S always smiling and I like hER laugh.
Mireia isn’t confident in some situations, she is very impatient and talkative. She’s A very good friend, when I need help she gives me SOME advice. HER favorite sport is swimming and volley-ball.
Mireia and I are very different, we get on really well.
Bye teacher!
LOVELY TEXT, ALICIA, CONTINUE PRACTISING!
hello maribel!
I’m going to speak about Ariadna Gil,because she is my best friend.she lives in Piera.She has got a sixteen years old.she has black hair,brown eyes,and a beatuful face!
She is a very important for my, because she helps me when i need it, she lisents my problems,she is a very nice person,and she is a very important person in my live.
I go with Ariandna to the gim every day.She help me with my homework and also with my studies.
I only like stay with her always.:)
bye bye teacher!:D
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hello maribel!
I’m going to speak about Ariadna Gil, because she is my best friend.she lives in Piera.She IS
has got asixteen years old. she has black hair, brown eyes,and a beaUTIful face!She is
avery important for mE, because she helps me when I need it, she lisTENS TO my problems,she is a very nice person,and she is a very important person in my liFe.I go with Ariandna to the gYm every day.She helpS me with my homework and also with my studies.
I only WANT TO BE with her FOREVER 🙂
NICE TEXT RAQUEL, CONTINUE PRACTISING AND TELL ARIADNA ABOUT THIS, SHE’LL LOVE TO KNOW!
bye bye teacher!:D
Hi Maribel!!
I’m going to speak about Laia Beltran because she is my best friend. She lives in Hostalets and she go at he same class that me.I’ve known since we were very small.
Laia is the blonde with brown eyes, her hair short and she isn’t tall She is very good person, I listen when ever I need it, because I the only person that I just contant everything.
Bye Maribel!!
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Hi Maribel!!
I’m going to speak about Laia Beltran because she is my best friend. She lives in Hostalets and she goES TO the same class thaN me.I’ve known HER since we were very small.
Laia is
theblonde with brown eyes, her hair IS short and she isn’t tall She is A very good person, SHE listenS whenever I need it, because SHE IS the only person that I TELL everything.Bye Maribel!!
THANKS MIREIA, TELL LAIA ABOUT THIS, SHE WILL LOVE TO KNOW!
hello maribel!!
I writing about my best friend Rebeca mahedero, it is a importat person for me. she goes at he same class.
she’s got a curly brown hair , brown eyes and she’s slim. she is a good person, because she always help my.
For my is very important because it is always with me when I need it.
when I stay whith her i laugh a lot and we had a great time,she always brings a smile.
She’s nice and very responsible.
Definitely, she’s part of mi live.
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hello maribel!!
I AM writing about my best friend Rebeca Mahedero, SHE is aN importat person for me. she goes TO he same class.
she’s got
acurly brown hair , brown eyes and she’s slim. she is a good person, because she always helpS mE.For mE, SHE is very important because SHE is always with me when I need HER.
when I AM WITH her I laugh a lot and we haVE a great time,she always brings a smile.
She’s nice and very responsible.
Definitely, she’s part of mi liFe.
THANKS FOR YOUR DESCRIPTION LEILA, HAVE YOU ALREADY TOLD REBECA ABOUT THIS, SHE’LL BE HAPPY TO KNOW.
Hello Maribel.
This it is the summary of my favorite object.
My favorite object is the baseball ball, I play it since I was seven years old.
The baseball is played with eleven players in the play and eleven it was to be batted they do the changes when three players has been eliminate.
It is a very amusing game.
Bye mariel¡¡¡
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Hello Maribel.
This __ is the summary of my favorite object.
My favorite object is the baseball ball, I play it since I was seven years old.
The baseball is played with eleven players in the GAME and
eleven it was to be battedthey do the changes when three players haVE been eliminateD.It is a very amusing game.
Bye mariBEL
DARIEL, I’VE HAD SOME PROBLEMS TO UNDERSTAND YOUR TEXT IN THE LAST PARAGRAPH, IF YOU WANT SOME HELP, PLEASE, LET ME KNOW.
This person is very important for me,he is Christian,he go at he same class that me.
He has short brown hair and blue eyes.
He is sixteen years old,he is very intelligent, very happy.
He likes house music,R&B, and rap.
we know from 4t ESO and we have done very good friends. This year we are going to the same basketball team.
This is my description.
Bye maribel
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This person is very important for me,he is Christian,he goES TO he same class thaN me.
He has short brown hair and blue eyes.
He is sixteen years old, he is very intelligent, very happy.
He likes house music,R&B, and rap.
we know EACH OTHER from 4t ESO and we have BECOME very good friends. This year we are going to the same basketball team.
This is my description.
Bye maribel
THANKS A LOT, DARIEL, KEEP WRITING, NICE TEXT.
I’m going to talk about Ferran. My friend is in the same class as me at school. We went together at the same class all our lifes. He’s sixteen years old. Ferran is very tall. He has got short brown hair and brown eyes.
Ferran is very friendly and a bit talkative. I love him because always I need some help he try to help me and when I have a trouble he always try to find a good solution for it.
He has a lovely smile and it makes smile to me when I’m sad.
He is very important in my life. I wish don’t lose him and be her friend for ever.
Sorry Maribel, I can’t send to you my comentari before.
See you tomorrow!
xxoo
Laura.
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I’m going to talk about Ferran. My friend is in the same class as me at school. We went together TO the same class all our liVes. He’s sixteen years old. Ferran is very tall. He has got short brown hair and brown eyes.
Ferran is very friendly and a bit talkative. I love him because WHENEVER I need some help he trIES to help me and when I AM IN trouble he always trIES to find a good solution for it.
He has a lovely smile and it makes ME smile when I’m sad.
He is very important in my life. I wish I WON’T lose him and WILL be hIS friend forever.
Sorry Maribel, I COULDN’T send __ you my comMENT before.
See you tomorrow!
IT’S OK, LAURA, LOVELY TEXT, MAKE SURE YOUR FRIEND KNOWS ABOUT YOUR FEELINGS, I’D BE DELIGHTED IF I WAS HIM.
KEEP WORKING, PLEASE
xxoo
Laura.
Hello Maribel!
I’m going to talk about Assumpta Torres.
I know her since we were three years old, she was one of my best friends in my childhood, we were always together. But, then I left the school when I was nine, we kept in touch some time but then we lost the relationship we had. Since this year that luckily she goes at the same class as me and I’m so happy with that!
She has blonde medium hair, big and beautiful blue eyes, and I always tell her that she seems Snow White (but blonde) because she has a perfect white skin but her cheeks are always rosy.
She is a very nice person, funny, cheerful and happy, and for sure a very good friend! I’m so glad because we can continue with our friendship like before and I don’t want to lose her again this time, I hope that this won’t happen!
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Hello Maribel!
I’m going to talk about Assumpta Torres.
I know her since we were three years old, she was one of my best friends in my childhood, we were always together. But, then I left the school when I was nine, we kept in touch some time but then we lost the relationship we had. Since this year, WHEN luckily she goes at the same class as me, ___ I’m so happy ABOUT that!
She has blonde medium-LENGTH hair, big and beautiful blue eyes, and I always tell her that she seems Snow White (but blonde) because she has a perfect white skin but her cheeks are always rosy.
She is a very nice person, funny, cheerful and happy, and for sure a very good friend! I’m so glad because we can continue with our friendship like before and I don’t want to lose her again this time, I hope that this won’t happen!
NICE TEXT, ELISENDA, KEEP ON WORKING!
My friend Josep is in the same class as me at school . When I was five years old was my best friend in the school, but when I was eight years old went to another school . He is sixteen years old , he is very slim , and he has eye brown . He is fairly high . He has black hair . he’s very talkative ,very responsible and very intelligent .
He is persona admirable .
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My friend Josep is in the same class as me at school . When I was five years old HE was my best friend AT school, but when I was eight years old HE went to another school . He is sixteen years old , he is very slim , and he has BROWN EYES. He is fairly TALL. He has black hair . he’s very talkative ,very responsible and very intelligent .
He is AN AMAZING PERSON.
THANK YOU DANA, GO ON WRITING AND PRACTISING
I’m going to describe one of my best friends, ‘Raquel Salmeron’.
She is sixteen years old and she’s got dark hair and brown eyes. Her skin isn’t brown but neither clear, people always do funny comments about it!
Raquel is a bit shy but when she opens to someone she’s very friendly. She is sensible, polite, cheerful, generous… But she isn’t very confident of her self.
Now she is doing 1st of batxillerat at he same class than me, I hope she gets on well this course and finds out what she wants to do in the future!
In her free time, she’s in the computer, mainly messenger or facebook, she goes to the gym or hangs out with friends: me and others!
We both have things in common and also differences, but we love each other and that’s all it mAtters!
see you! 🙂
María!
THANKS MARIA, NICE TEXT.
Hello Maribel, I describe my favotite football player.
Zlatan Ibrahimovic is a sweden player, is very tall 1.96 metres, long hair and a very big nose. He is a black beld of karate. Last year he played in f.c.Barcelona and score 21 goals and a lot off asistence, but in the final of the season he injuries and don’t play very well.
He is a very personality man because is a very angry. He maried with a very inteligent woman and had two children. Zlatan has a lot off tatoos one of his tatoos is the name and the date of born the two childreen.
For my “Ibra” is my favourite player because is very technic.
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Hello Maribel, I describe my favotite football player.
Zlatan Ibrahimovic is a SwedISH player, HE is very tall, 1.96 metres, HE HAS long hair and a very big nose. He is a black belT of karate. Last year he played in f.c.Barcelona and scoreD 21 goals and a lot OF aSsistenceS, but in the END of the season he GOT injurED and DIDN’T play very well.
He HAS GOT a very STRONG personality because HE GETS very angry. He IS marRied TO a very inteligent woman and THEY HAVE two children. Zlatan has a lot off tatoos, one of his tatoos is the name and the date of BIRTH OF BOTH childrEn.
For mE “Ibra” is my favourite player because is very technicAL.
THANKS, ALEX, CONTINUE PRACTISING, GOOD WORK
Long Life MacGyver ¡ and long life Maribel¡ Bye Bye 🙂
thanks! Eloy, només falta, god save the queen!!!
MacGyver
He’s a normal man, he has brown hair with a look like Sting of the Police, he reminds me a lot to the musician, he has also brown ayes. He wears always a brown leather jacket. When his plans final good he always regales us with a gorgeous smile, so we can see him smiling in every episode. He can make a boom from a pipe or a chewing gum, everything which surround us can explode and we still continue happy, the humanity is in a real danger and we don’t know that¡ He’s not too tall but not too short. He also wears the typical aviator glasses, he seems a really heartbreaker, he’s a great man ¡
He’s thin and athletic, he’s always in troubles but he can take care of himself perfectly, you can leave him with a clip in the middle of the desert that at the next week you will find there a house with a swimming pool and a dog. He’s the perfect man: with the spirit of the A-team, with the skills of DIY, with an incredible body and face and the best of a real man: the aviator glasses.
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MacGyver
He’s a normal man, he has brown hair with a look like Sting of Police, he reminds me a lot OF the musician, he has also brown Eyes. He ALWAYS wears ___a brown leather jacket. When his plans END WELL he always OFFERS us ___a gorgeous smile, so we can see him smiling in every episode. He can make a boMB from a pipe or a chewing gum, everything which surroundS us can explode and we ARE still happy, ___humanity is in a real danger and we don’t know that¡ He’s not too tall but not too short. He also wears the typical aviator glasses, he seems a really heartbreaker, he’s a great man ¡
He’s thin and athletic, he’s always in troublE but he can take care of himself perfectly, you can leave him with a clip in the middle of the desert AND the next week you will find there a house with a swimming pool and a dog. He’s the perfect man: with the spirit of the A-team, with the skills of DIY, with an incredible body and face and the best of a real man: the aviator glasses.
HAHAHA, HILARIOUS!!, I LOVE YOUR IRONIC TONE, NICE TEXT, ELOY
BY THE WAY, I MUST CONFESS THAT I USED TO WATCH THIS TV SERIES WHEN I WAS A TEENAGER!! BUT DON’T TELL ANYONE, IT’S A SECRET!
Hello Maribel, in this text I try to decribe one of my favourites football player, Andrés Iniesta.
He’s twenty six years old. He isn’t tall and big, and he has black hair. For me, Andrés only has one specially feature, his skin is too light.
Andrés Iniesta is a person who always think about his family and his friend, for example, when he scored the goal of the World Cup final he dedicated the goal to his dead friend Dani Jarque. Also Andrés is too calm.
All in all, I think that Andrés Iniesta is a very good example as a pearson for the young people.
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Hello Maribel, in this text I try to decribe one of my favourite___ football player, Andrés Iniesta.
He’s twenty six years old. He isn’t tall and big, and he has black hair. For me, Andrés only has one special__ feature, his skin is too light.
Andrés Iniesta is a person who always thinkS about his family and his friendS, for example, when he scored the goal of the World Cup final he dedicated the goal to his dead friend Dani Jarque. Also Andrés is too calm.
All in all, I think that Andrés Iniesta is a very good example as a pErson for the young people.
GREAT FOOTBALLER INDEED, THANKS PAU.
Hello Maribel!!
How are you?
Well, I start a description of a one person:
This person is very important for me, she is Elizabeth, she go at he same class that me.
She has got sixteen years old, and she is taller than me.
She has got long brown hair, and her eyes are brown too.
She is a very cheerful, friendly, and she help a lot of people always she can, but she is a little bit shy.
I know him since we went to school, but we lost our friendship when she went to other school, but this year we go at the same class again!!
All in all, I think that Elizabeth is a grate friend.
Our friendship will last a long time, sure.
This is my description!!
See you the next week.
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Hello Maribel!!
How are you?
Well, I start a description of a ___ person:
This person is very important for me, she is Elizabeth, she goES at he same class that me.
She IS sixteen years old, and she is taller than me.
She has got long brown hair, and her eyes are brown too.
She is ___ very cheerful, friendly, and she helpS a lot of people WHENEVER she can, but she is a little bit shy.
I know hER since we went to school, but we lost our friendship when she went to other school, but this year we go at the same class again!!
All in all, I think that Elizabeth is a grEAT friend.
Our friendship will last a long time, sure.
This is my description!!
See you the next week
THANKS FOR YOUR TEXT, ASSUMPTA, MAKE SURE ELI KNOWS ABOUT YOUR FEELINGS, I’D LOVE TO KNOW IF I WERE HER.
I’m going to my description.
I was shy, sensible and quaiet above all don’t met a people.
I have a round face with freckles, small and brown eyes, long brown hair. I am neither very high nor very low and I’m plump
I like swimming, listening to music and especially spending time with my family.
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I’m going to WRITE my description.
I AM shy, sensible and quIET, above all I don’t meEt people.
I have a round face with freckles, small and brown eyes, long brown hair. I am neither very TALL nor very SHORT and I’m plump
I like swimming, listening to music and especially spending time with my family.
THANKS NEUS, KEEP PRACTISING YOUR WRITING
Hello Maribel,
I don’t know of who do this description, but after thinking very much, I do this description of David Galán Uroz.
David, is in 1st batxillerat A, at the humanistic, but the last four years, he is in my classroom. He is very good person, but he enjoys insulting at the other people, but the person, don’t listen he. He and me are very seemed, but only in the interior. Physically, he isn’t tall, but jump very much, and he is very strong. His hair is brown, and the colours of his eyes, is light brown. He use glasses for study, and look the blackboard. He ALWAIS is dressed with a short trousers, in summer, and winter. The last months, he don’t stay with me, because he have got a girlfriend, but this, don’t import me, because he is mi best friend, and Judit is one of them. I like that they are happy, and alwais go to cinema, or other places with me, and other firends.
I finish mi description with David, a people with I am proud to call, my best friend. This description is a “present” for him, and a coment at your bloc. I like mix both things.
Bye Maribel
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Edgar Gutiérrez Biel
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Hello Maribel,
I don’t know of whoM TO do this description, but after thinking very much, I do this description of David Galán Uroz.
David, is in 1st batxillerat A, at the humanistic, but the last four years, he WAS in my classroom. He is A very good person, but he enjoys insulting at the other people, but the personS don’t listenTO hIM. He and I are very sIMILAR, but only INSIDE. Physically, he isn’t tall, but HE jumpS very much, and he is very strong. His hair is brown, and the colour__ of his eyes is light brown. He useS glasses for studyING, and lookING AT the blackboard. He IS ALWAYS dressed with __short trousers, in summer, and winter. The last months, he DOESN’T MEET me, because he haS got a girlfriend, but this DOESN’T MATTER TO me, because he is mY best friend, and Judit is one of them. I like that they are happy, and HE alwais goES to cinema, or other places with me, and other fRIENDS.
I finish mY description OF David, a peRSON THAT I am proud to call my best friend. This description is a “present” for him, and a coment ON your bloG. I like mixING both things.
Bye Maribel
THANKS EDGAR, CONTINUE PRACTISING YOUR WRITING AND MAKE SURE DAVID READS YOUR TEXT, HE MUST KNOW ABOUT YOUR FEELINGS!.
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Edgar Gutiérrez Biel
Hi Maribel!
I’m going to speak about Dana Gómez, because she is one of my friends and we meet us from that we were young, and I lived a very good moments with her.
She’s sixteen years old, and she isn’t very tall. She is slim, and she’s got brown and green eyes and straight, long, blonde hair.
From that we were young, we were together but after we were very time distant.
Dana is cheerful and extrovert person. She is very friendly, and when you see her, she is always singing. When I’m with her, I laugh.
She talks sometimes about her problems and I try to help her.
All in all, I think Dana is in general a good person, and most important, she is a good friend.
Bye Maribel, you have a good day!
Josep (Sorry Maribel, I detect one error in the other text!)
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Hi Maribel!
I’m going to speak about Dana Gómez, because she is one of my friends and we KNOW EACH OTHER SINCE we were young, and I lived __ very good moments with her.
She’s sixteen years old, and she isn’t very tall. She is slim, and she’s got brown and green eyes and straight, long, blonde hair.
SINCE we were young, we were together but after we were LONG time distant.
Dana is A cheerful and extrovert person. She is very friendly, and when you see her, she is always singing. When I’m with her, I laugh.
She talks sometimes about her problems and I try to help her.
All in all, I think Dana is in general a good person, and most important, she is a good friend.
Bye Maribel, you have a good day!
THANKS JOSEP, NICE TEXT, KEEP WRITING!
Hi Maribel!
I’m going to describe one of my friends. She’s called Erica and is from Piera. I met her in my other school when we were 5 years old. With her I’ve had a lot of good times. Since I started going out with her I considered her a very good friend because she has always worried about me and has helped me giving me advices. I try to do the same and we chat about a lot of different things. Now we aren’t going to the same high school but we are still in touch and we try to see each other at least once a week. For me she is the best friend that I coul ever had.
Bye teacher!
xxx
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Hi Maribel!
I’m going to describe one of my friends. She’s called Erica and is from Piera. I met her in my other school when we were 5 years old. With her I’ve had a lot of good times. Since I started going out with her I consider__ her a very good friend because she has always worried about me and has helped me giving me advice__. I try to do the same and we chat about a lot of different things. Now we aren’t going to the same high school but we are still in touch and we try to see each other at least once a week. For me she is the best friend that I coulD ever haVE.
Bye teacher!
xxx
NICE TEXT, THANKS, ELISA!
Hello Maribel! 🙂
I’m going to speak about Raquel Salmeron because is my best friend. She was born in 3rd October of 1994, now she is sixteen years old. She is a nice person she helps me when I need it,and also she listens to me when I have a problem,I tell everything to her because she never say nothing to other persons she is a very confidence person,she is the person with which I spend my free time: I go with she to the gym every day, and in the weekend I always stay with her. Physically: she has a dark hair, brown eyes and a normal stature.
And with this I finish, bye bye Maribel!
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Hello Maribel! 🙂
I’m going to speak about Raquel Salmeron because SHE is my best friend. She was born ON 3rd October of 1994, now she is sixteen years old. She is a nice person, she helps me when I need it,and also she listens to me when I have a problem,I tell everything to her because she never sayS ANYthing to other persons, she is a very TRUSTFUL person,she is the person with which I spend my free time: I go with HER to the gym every day, and AT the weekend I always stay with her. Physically: she has ___ dark hair, brown eyes and aN AVERAGE HEIGHT.
And with this I finish, bye bye Maribel!
THANKS ARIADNA!!!
Hi Maribel!
I’m going to describe one famous person: Rihanna.
She’s a very beautiful girl with an expressive big brown eyes. She’s very slim and tall and her hair is black and very short. She has got a lot of tattoos in her body but my favorite tattoo are a few stars that she has got in the neck, I love it!
I don’t know she but I think that she is a very good person, It sames to be nice and agradable person because she always has got one very cute smile in the face.
bye teacher!
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Hi Maribel!
I’m going to describe one famous person: Rihanna.
She’s a very beautiful girl with ___ expressive big brown eyes. She’s very slim and tall and her hair is black and very short. She has got a lot of tattoos in her body but my favorite tattoo are a few stars that she has got On the neck, I love it!
I don’t know HER but I think that she is a very good person, SHE sames to be A nice and SWEET person because she has ALWAYS got A very cute smile ON HER face.
bye teacher!
THANKS LAIA
HELLO MARIBEL!!!!
I’m going to speak about my beautiful girlfriend Judit Venegas. She is seventeen years old. She is a long and straight hair. Judit has a beautiful eyes and perfect lips. Definitely your face is perfect and beautiful.
Judit is a very nice person, she is a very romantic, fun, good people,interesant, friendly. Judit help with my problems, problem with my family, brothers , school , studies and others, is a nice person.
Judit is a very talkative person and i love swim, tennis and play basketbol.
Judit is a small person because has a big heart.
Definetly judit is my girlfriend i love , and is the best important people in my heart.
BYE BYE MARIBEL!!!!!
DAVID GALÁN UROZ.
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HELLO MARIBEL!!!!
I’m going to speak about my beautiful girlfriend Judit Venegas. She is seventeen years old. She HAS__ long and straight hair. Judit has ___ beautiful eyes and perfect lips. Definitely HER face is perfect and beautiful.
Judit is a very nice person, she is a very romantic, funNY, good peRSON, interesTING, friendly. Judit helpS with my problems, problemS with my family, brothers , school , studies and others, SHE is a nice person.
Judit is a very talkative person and SHE loveS swimMING, tennis and playING basketbALL.
Judit is a small person BUT SHE has a big heart.
Definetly judit is my girlfriend, I love HER , and SHE is the MOST important peRSON in my heart.
THANKS DAVID, CONTINUE WRITING AND PRACTISING
Hello teacher!
I’m going to speak about Carla Martínez, my best friend from preschoolers and now she goes to my class. She is sixteen years old. She’s got a curled and long hair and a green eyes. Everyone says that she has a small nose and a beautiful eyes.
Carla is a true friend. In fact, she’s a person who gives you advices, helps you when you need it, and listens to me when i have a problem, for example with my boyfriend or with my family, when I have an argument with both of them, she listens to me and she knows how can help me.
Carla is a talkative person, she’s very friendly. Carla loves volley-ball, but prefers playing football.
Although Carla and I are very similars and we get on very well because we know ourselves since we had one year old.
All in all, I think that Carla is a confident person and the best friend that I had!
Bye-bye Maribel!
Albaxx
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Hello teacher!
I’m going to speak about Carla Martínez, my best friend from NURSERY SCHOOL and now she goes to my class. She is sixteen years old. She’s got ___ curlY and long hair and ___ green eyes. Everyone says that she has a small nose and ___ beautiful eyes.
Carla is a true friend. In fact, she’s a person who gives you advice__, helps you when you need it, and listens to me when I have a problem, for example with my boyfriend or with my family, when I have an argument with both of them, she listens to me and she knows how SHE can help me.
Carla is a talkative person, she’s very friendly. Carla loves volley-ball, but prefers playing football.
Although????? Carla and I are very similar__ and we get on very well because we know ourselves since we WERE one year old.
All in all, I think that Carla is a confident person and the best friend that I haVE!
NICE TEXT, THANKS ALBA
Bye-bye Maribel!
Hi, Maribel again!
I’ll give you work to correct my writing.
I’m going to talk about Pedro, because He’s one of my best friends.
He’s my second basketball coach and He help’s me with the childs.
He’s eightteen years old as I. He’s tall and slim, He’s brown hair and brown eyes. He’s cheerful, talkative and very impatient.
He always play Xbox and wacht the TV, but when He want to play basketball, call me and other people to play a match.
He always make three points shot.
Well, to conclude, He’s a great friend.
Bye.
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Hi, Maribel again!
I’ll give you work to correct my writing.
I’m going to talk about Pedro, because he’s one of my best friends.
He’s my second basketball coach and he helpS me with the childREN.
He’s eighTeen years old as ME. He’s tall and slim, He’s GOT brown hair and brown eyes. He’s cheerful, talkative and very impatient.
He always playS Xbox and wachtES __TV, but when he wantS to play basketball, HE callS me and other people to play a match.
He always makeS three points shot.
Well, to conclude, he’s a great friend.
Bye.
THANK YOU FOR YOUR TEXT, JUST BE CAREFUL WITH THIRD PERSON SINGULAR -S IN PRESENT AND REMEMBER WE DO NOT WRITE HE WITH CAPITAL LETTER.
Helloo Maribel!
Back to begin me, well, now I describe a person, and… I describe my brother.
Why? because I love he.
MY brother is: Daniel Rafecas. Is possible to know him. Her goes to 1r bach B. Dani don´t very tall. He’s strong and inteligent, but is a great person, but is very shy. In home is very fun, and don´t silent, and I can trust to him, and listens to you if you have a problem and care about you.
But, out home, he is very shy, and very quiet. When you konw it is more open to you.
People say that: “Dani and you are similar”. But I don´t believe.
And even that may not show it I love him very much and I always worry about it, because Her really great person.
I love my brother. And I know that this text be compromised… but it’s really. I love he.
well, I finished.
Bye teacher. xxxxxxxx
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Helloo Maribel!
Back to begin me??????, well, now I’LL describe a person, and… I WILL describe my brother.
Why? because I love hIM.
MY brother is__Daniel Rafecas. IT Is possible THAT YOU know him. HE goes to 1r bach B. Dani ISN’T very tall. He’s strong and inteLLIgent, AND HE IS a great person, but HE is very shy. AT home, HE is very funNY, and HE ISN’T QUIET, and I can trust ___him, and HE listens to you if you have a problem and careS about you.
But, outSIDE home, he is very shy, and very quiet. When you kNOW HIM, HE is more open to you.
People say that: “Dani and you are similar”. But I don´t believe THAT.
And even IF I may not show it I love him very much and I always worry about HIM, because HE IS A really great person.
I love my brother. And I know that this text WILL be EMBARRASSING??… but it’s TRUE. I love hIM.
well, I finished.
Bye teacher. xxxxxxxx
THANKS RUBEN, MAKE SURE DANIEL KNOWS ABOUT YOUR FEELINGS, HE’LL BE HAPPY TO READ ALL THIS! HAVE A LOOK AT THE TEXT CORRECTIONS AND IF YOU NEED TO ASK ANYTHING, PLEASE DO.