Read and work on page 10 of your text book. Then write a post on this blog about yourself and your interests. Try to be careful with punctuation, grammar and word order.
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Read and work on page 10 of your text book. Then write a post on this blog about yourself and your interests. Try to be careful with punctuation, grammar and word order.
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Hi Maribel!
My name is Josep and I have 16 years old. I live in Piera and I studying at IES Guinovarda.
One of my interests is the music. I like all music except rock metal and flamingo. I listen more music at day, I help me to unworried.
Other of my interests is the internet. I talk with friends that don’t see during the week or friends that long time what I don’t see.
My other interests is paint, I like paint because I help me to relax and disconnect and also I think that I paint very well, but this is my opinion. I have spent teen years painting and so far it has I’m not stopping.
And my other interests is go out with my friends, the most importantly.
Bye Teacher! You have a good day!
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Hi Maribel!
My name is Josep and I AM 16 years old. I live in Piera and I AM studying at IES Guinovarda.
One of my interests is ___ music. I like all music except rock metal and flamingo. I listen TO A LOT OF music at day, IT helpS me to BE unworried.
Other of my interest__ is internet. I talk with friends that I don’t see during the week or friends that I HAVEN’T SEEN FOR A LONG TIME.
My other interest__ is paintING, I like paintING because IT helpS me to relax and disconnect and I ALSO think that I paint very well, but this is my opinion. I have spent TEN years painting and so far I HAVE NOT STOPPED.
And my other interest is goING out with my friends, the most important.
Bye Teacher! have a good day!
THANKS FOR YOUR TEXT, JOSEP Mª, KEEP WRITING AND ASK ME IF ANY DOUBTS, PLEASE
Hi Maribel!
I’m Marc and I’m 15 years old. Now I’m in 1st of batxillerat and I’m studing in a new “Institut”. Before this I whent to Apiaria school for 13 years.
I use to listen a lot of music because I love it. My favourite tipe of music is house and dance music.
This year I started playing basketball but since last year I practiced tennis.
I wish you like this short introducing.
Bye Maribel!!
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Hi Maribel!
I’m Marc and I’m 15 years old. Now I’m in 1st of batxillerat and I’m studYing AT a new HIGH SCHOOL. Before this I wENT to Apiaria school for 13 years.
I USUALLY listen TO a lot of music because I love it. My favourite tYpe of music is house and dance music.
This year I started playing basketball but since last year I practice tennis.
I wish you like this short introducTION.
Bye Maribel!!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR TEXT, CONTINUE PRACTISING
Hi Maribel.
Well, I will explain you about me and my interests.
My name is Alex Juez, I’m 16 years old and I’m a student of 1 st “Batxillerat”.
My best interest is SPORT,particulary handball, basketball, football and all of types of motorsport. I like play this sports with my friends or watching this on TV, but nowadays I don’t play any sport.
Other of my interests is Music. I like listening pop-rock, dance, house and pop, but i can’t stand metal rock.
Go out with my friends is another important interest, but with the school and the exams, is so difficult.
Well, this is all.
Goodbye Maribel:)
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Hi Maribel.
Well, I will explain you about me and my interests.
My name is Alex Juez, I’m 16 years old and I’m a student of 1st “Batxillerat”.
My best interest is SPORT, particulary handball, basketball, football and all of types of motorsport. I like playING thESE sports with my friends or watching this on TV, but nowadays I don’t play any sport.
Other of my interests is Music. I like listening TO pop-rock, dance, house and pop, but I can’t stand metal rock.
GoING out with my friends is another important interest, but with the school and the exams, IT is so difficult.
Well, this is all.
Goodbye Maribel:)
THANKS ALEX, CONTINUE WRITING AND PRACTISING
Hi Maribel,
I’ m Btissam and I’m 17 years old.I was born in Tanger is beautiful city a big city from Morocco Now I ‘m studying “Batchillerat” in IES Guinovarda,in Piera.
in my free time i like go to the cine with my friends listening to the music dancing….
when I go to the cinema with my friends sometimes I get bored because they like horror films and give me a little scared I’d rather watch movies love romance ……
by teacher!!!
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Hi Maribel,
I’ m Btissam and I’m 17 years old.I was born in Tanger, IT is beautiful city a big city from Morocco Now I ‘m studying “BatXillerat” AT IES Guinovarda, in Piera.
in my free time i like goING to the cineMA with my friends listening to the music, dancing….
when I go to the cinema with my friends sometimes I get bored because they like horror films and THAT SCARES ME a little, I’d rather watch love, romanTIC MOVIES ……
byE teacher!!!
THANKS BTISSAM, IF ANY DOUBTS ABOUT CORRECTIONS ASK ME PLEASE.
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i’m noussayba and i’m study in 1st.batxillerat in Ies Guinovarda.At the moment i’m not studying for any exam and i’m very happy.But when i’m not studing i like watch the tv and listen to music.
i usually listening pop and house but i can’t stand hip hop music.
at the moment for my,is very important to pass english.
bye
Noussayba
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hei
I’m Noussayba and I’m studyING 1st.batxillerat AT Ies Guinovarda. At the moment I’m not studying for any exam and I’m very happy. But when I’m not studYing i like watchING tv and listenING to music.
I usually listen TO pop and house but I can’t stand hip hop music.
At the moment for mE, IT is very important to pass English.
bye
Noussayba
THANKS NOUSSAYBA, CONTINUE PRACTISING AND WRITING
hello teacher .
I’m dana , I am 15 years old but in 15 days is my birthday . I’ve never had a bloc , this is the first to write. I love listening to music I like flamenco ,regaeton , hause and some songs from mecano ‘hijo de la luna’ because my mother loves the music of 80 .
I love singing ,I’m happy when I sing.
I hate sport and study because prefer being with my friends, but I think about my future..
good bye!!
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hello teacher .
I’m Dana , I am 15 years old but in 15 days IT is my birthday . I’ve never had a bloG , this is MY first TIME to write. I love listening to music I like flamenco ,regaeton , hOuse and some songs from Mecano ‘hijo de la luna’ because my mother loves the music of 80 .
I love singing ,I’m happy when I sing.
I hate sport and studyING because I prefer being with my friends, but I think about my future..
good bye!!
THANKS DANA, I ALSO LOVE THE MUSIC OF THE 80’S, CONTINUE WRITING AND PRACTISING.
hello maribel.
My name is dariel, i have 17 years old, i from dominican republic.
i have 1 years old living in spain, i like play basketball and beisball.
my favorite music is hip hop.
i like dance.
bye teacher¡¡¡
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hello maribel.
My name is Dariel, I AM 17 years old, I AM from Dominican Republic.
i have LIVED 1 year in Spain, I like playING basketball and bASEball.
my favorite music is hip hop.
i like dancING.
bye teacher¡¡¡
THANKS FOR YOUR TEXT, IF YOU HAVE DOUBTS ASK ME ABOUT CORRECTIONS, KEEP WRITING AND PRACTISING PLEASE
Hi Maribel!
My name is Karla, i’m 16 years old.
I’m studying at IES Guinovarda. I live in Piera.
My hobbies are listening music, going out with my friends and playing tennis and football.I like watching movies in the cinema too. My favourite music are rap and pop. I hate house music, I thing that is very boring. My favourite subjects are languages, but i hate Maths.
Goodbye teacher!!
Hi Maribel!
My name is Karla, i’m 16 years old.
I’m studying at IES Guinovarda. I live in Piera.
My hobbies are listening TO music, going out with my friends and playing tennis and football.I like watching movies in the cinema too. My favourite music are rap and pop. I hate house music, I thinK that IT is very boring. My favourite subjects are languages, but I hate Maths.
Goodbye teacher!!
THANKS FOR WRITING, CARLA
Hi Maribel!!
I’m Miriam, I’ve 17 years old,I’m studient to 1st batxillerat. My favorite interest is music , football and dance.My favorite music is house,pop snd flamenco and my favorite singers is David Bisbal,Alex Ubago.
I’dont practise play football but sometimes play.
bye teacher!!!
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Hi Maribel!!
I’m Miriam, I AM 17 years old, I’m A studEnt OF 1st batxillerat. My favorite interestS ARE music, football and dance.My favorite music is house,pop And flamenco and my favorite singers ARE David Bisbal,Alex Ubago.
I don’t practise football but sometimes I play.
bye teacher!!!
Hi teacher!
how are you?
MY name is Raquel, i have 16 years old.My birthday is 3rd of Octover.
I’m studying baxillerato in IES Guinovarda in Piera. I live in Can Mas with my parents, my grandparents
and my 2 sisters.I have a dog, her name is Boss.
I like much colors,my favorites are blue, orange, red and purple.
My favorite food is pasta and i like much chocolate, is my addiction.
My interest is music and going to the gym with my best friend Ariadna Gil.
I love music, i like house, pop, hip hop..i like all music.I lisent music every day, because forget problems.
I like at the films, i much favorites films, but ” the last song” is a very precious film.
Goodbye Maribel!:)
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Hi teacher!
how are you?
MY name is Raquel, I AM 16 years old.My birthday is ON 3rd of OctoBer.
I’m studying “baCHillerato” AT IES Guinovarda in Piera. I live in Can Mas with my parents, my grandparents
and my 2 sisters.I have a dog, her name is Boss.
I like MANY colors,my favorite__ are blue, orange, red and purple.
My favorite food is pasta and I like chocolate VERY MUCH, IT is my addiction.
My interest is music and going to the gym with my best friend Ariadna Gil.
I love music, I like house, pop, hip hop..I like all music.I LISTEN TO music every day, AND SO, I forget problems.
I like ___ films, MY favorite__ films?????, but ” the last song” is a very precious film.
Goodbye Maribel!:)
Hi, Maribel!
Well, to begin with, I’ll explain you somethig about me and my live.
I’m eightteen years old and I’m studing 1rt of batxillerat for second time.But personally, I think that I’ll pass this year.
In this moment, I’m a basketball coach because I love basketball so much.
I’d love to play basketball but I’d rather not, because I don’t have more time.
Hmm, to conclude, I love nu-metal like SOAD(sistem of a down),rock, dance , heavy metal and a little of house.
Well, this is all.
Bye.
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Hi, Maribel!
Well, to begin with, I’ll explain you somethiNg about me and my liFe.
I’m eighTeen years old and I’m studYing 1ST of batxillerat for second time.But personally, I think that I’ll pass this year.
In this moment, I’m a basketball coach because I love basketball so much.
I’d love to play basketball but I’d rather not, because I don’t have mUCH time.
Hmm, to conclude, I love nu-metal like SOAD(sYstem of a down),rock, dance , heavy metal and a little of house.
Well, this is all.
Bye.
THANKS DANIEL, KEEP ON WRITING
Hey Maribel!!!
My name is Daniel,I have to 17 years old and I’am studient to Batxillerat in IES Guinovarda to in Piera.I am not always to live in Piera,I’ve 9 years to live in Piera.My favorite sport is football,but I don’t practise as far as to studien to Batxillerat.
My principal objective is approved to Batxillerat and university.
Bye Maribel!!
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Hey Maribel!!!
My name is Daniel, I AM 17 years old and I__am A studient OF Batxillerat AT IES Guinovarda __in Piera.I HAVE not always LIVED in Piera, I’ve BEEN LIVING IN PIERA FOR 9 years.My favorite sport is football,but I don’t practise as far as I AM STUDYING Batxillerat.
My MAIN objective is TO PASS Batxillerat and GO TO university.
Bye Maribel!!
THANKS FOR YOUR TEXT, DANIEL, KEEP ON WRITING AND PRACTISING
Hi teacher,
Now I do a little description about me:
I was born in Igualada the 20th of July in 1994 but nowaday I’m living in Piera. I’m a boy that likes do a lot of things and always be very busy. I play football in A.E. Piera since I was 10 years old and also I’m working to coach of a little footballers.
I love this sport and is very important for me to become every day better. Also I go out often with my friends because they’re very important for me and I had a great time always that I go with them. About me I thing that I’m very friendly and I like so much meet people.
Bye miss Maribel,
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Hi teacher,
Now I’LL do a little description about me:
I was born in Igualada ON 20th of July in 1994 but nowadayS I’m living in Piera. I’m a boy that likes doING a lot of things and IS always very busy. I play football in A.E. Piera since I was 10 years old and also I’m working AS coach of little footballers.
I love this sport and IT is very important for me to become BETTER every day. Also, I go out often with my friends because they’re very important for me and I ALWAYS haVE a great time WHEN I go OUT with them. About me I thinK that I’m very friendly and I like so much meetING people.
Bye miss Maribel,
THANKS JORDI, GO ON WITH YOUR PRACTISE, NICE TEXT.
Hello Maribel,
My best interest are hockey, is love this sport.All of my dad’s family practise this sport and I think that hockey is the best sport but, I love all of the sports: football, basketball… I a barcelona fan.
Othet of my jobs are pla computer games and listen music. My best computer game is “Call of dury” a shooter game, and music my favourite are dance and house musi, I love David Guetta.
Good bye !
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Hello Maribel,
My best interest IS hockey, I love this sport. EVERYONE AT my dad’s family practise this sport and I think that hockey is the best sport but, I love all ___sports: football, basketball… I a barcelona fan.
OtheR of my jobs are plaYING computer games and listenING TO music. My best computer game is “Call of dury” a shooter game, and MY FAVOURITE music IS dance and house musiC, I love David Guetta.
Good bye !
THANKS FOR YOUR TEXT, GO ON WRITING AND IF ANY DOUBTS, ASK ME PLEASE
maribel hello!
Let me explain a little about me
I have 17 years I have always lived in piera
i before coming to this institute was eaapiaria.
One of the things that I like music,
I have from 8 years playing the piano, I love to compose music and writing in my free time.
also took a young girl singing in a choir, but now I am a teacher of children, also play the piano in the choir.
I like the whole world of music because I can express everything I feel THROUGH THE piano.
I like all kinds of music, i in the future I would like to live it.
I hope you at least understand what I mean
bye
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maribel hello!
Let me explain a little about me
I AM 17 years OLD I have always lived in piera
Before coming to this SCHOOL I WAS AT eaapiaria.
One of the things that I like IS music,
I have PLAYING THE PIANO SINCE I WAS 8 years OLD, I love to compose music and writing in my free time.
I also WAS a young girl singing in a choir, but now I am a teacher of children, I also play the piano in the choir.
I like the whole world of music because I can express everything I feel THROUGH the piano.
I like all kinds of music, in the future I would like to live ON it.
I hope you at least understand what I mean
bye
OF COURSE I UNDERSTOOD YOUR TEXT, JUST SOME CORRECTIONS TO MAKE IT GRAMMATICALLY OK. KEEP ON WRITING AND IF QUESTIONS, ASK ME, PLEASE
Hi Maribel,
I’ m Alicia and I’m 17 years old. I was born in Barcelona, and I live in Piera. Now I ‘m studying “Batchillerat” in IES Guinovarda, but before I was studying in Apiaria.
Next I will explain some to you my hobbies and interests.
From the 5 years my favorite sport was roller skating, I was practicing it to the 15 years because I borke a knee and I was 5 months without being able to walk. Now my doctor doesn’t allow me a make some sports. Other sports that I like are swimming and volley-ball. However the football also I like, but I prefer to see in my TV.
Other hobbies I like are to listen music, hanging out with my friends and one thing that I don’t like is a read.
Well, this is my text. Bye!
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Hi Maribel,
I’ m Alicia and I’m 17 years old. I was born in Barcelona, and I live in Piera. Now I‘m studying “BatXillerat” AT IES Guinovarda, but before I was studying in Apiaria.
Next I will explain someTHING ___ ABOUT my hobbies and interests.
SINCE I WAS 5 years OLD, my favorite sport was roller skating, I was practicing it UNTIL THE AGE OF 15 years, WHEN I bROke a knee and I was 5 months without being able to walk. Now my doctor doesn’t allow me TO DO some sports. Other sports that I like are swimming and volley-ball. However, I ALSO LIKE football, but I prefer to WATCH IT ON my TV.
Other hobbies I like are listenING TO music, hanging out with my friends and one thing that I don’t like is readING.
THANKS ALICIA, NICE TEXT, HAVE A LOOK AT CORRECTIONS AND IF ANY DOUBT, ASK ME PLEASE.
Hi teacher!
After one week looking for the site for write I found it! well, I start to write!
I like too much to do martial arts because is one sport with very positive things; I gaine resistance, and I’m more speed than other girls.
The martial art that I do is called: Full contact.
Also I like to watch football at television and I’m of Futbol Club Barcelona (football team) and other of mi hobbies is listen to rap music (Eminem is my favorite rap singer).
Well teacher, I don’t know what more write and I finish here! bye Maribel.
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Hi teacher!
After one week looking for the site TO write I found it! well, I start to write!
I like VERY much DOING martial arts because IT is one sport with very positive things; I GAIN resistance, and I’m FASTER than other girls.
The martial art that I do is called: Full contact.
Also I like WATCHING football at television and I SUPPORT Futbol Club Barcelona (football team) and ANother of mY hobbies is listenING to rap music (Eminem is my favorite rap singer).
Well teacher, I don’t know what more TO write and I finish here! bye Maribel.
THANKS LAIA, KEEP ON WRITING AND PRACTISING.
Hello Maribel!
My interests are music and football.
I love music. I like house and pop music , I listen a lot of hours, because I feel so good when I hear!! . I would to make similar songs !
My other interest is football , I don’t play this sport but I love much see match.My brother plays football and I always see her team .It’s really exciting for me !
bye teacher 🙂
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Hello Maribel!
My interests are music and football.
I love music. I like house and pop music , I listen TO IT FOR a lot of hours, because I feel so good when I hear IT!! . I would LOVE to make similar songs !
My other interest is football , I don’t play this sport but I love WATCHING matchES VERY MUCH. My brother plays football and I always see hIS team .It’s really exciting for me !
THANKS FOR YOUR TEXT, SANDRA
Hi Maribel^^
How are you? I’m Nice, but don´t like this day, because it’s rain.
I start this post:
Well, to start with the things I like. For example de Basketball! Basketball is my life, I owe it all. Why? because with the basketball a feel, joy, happeness, and sadness.
Another thing I like… mm… Rock Music!! I love Rock Music! because it’s very beautiful, For example I like Simple plan, The Used, Avenged Sevenfold, And Madina lake, But also slow music, as Cristina Aguilera, one song called Hurt, It’s very very Beautiful this song.
Well, I have tired becase I have trained.
Goodbye Teacher.
Kisses
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Hi Maribel^^
How are you? I’m nice, but I don´t like this day, because it’s rainING.
I start this post:
Well, to start with the things I like. For example —basketball! Basketball is my life, I owe it all. Why? because with — basketball I feel, joy, happIness, and sadness.
Another thing I like… mm… Rock Music!! I love Rock Music! because it’s very beautiful, For example I like Simple plan, The Used, Avenged Sevenfold, And Madina lake, But also slow music, as Cristina Aguilera, one song called Hurt, it’s very very beautiful ………
Well, I AM tired becase I have trained A LOT.
Goodbye Teacher.
THANKS FOR YOUR TEXT, RUBEN
Kisses