7 thoughts on “starter unit

  1. Miriam

    Hey Maribel!!

    My name is Miriam,I’ve 17 years old,I’am studient to 1 Batxillerat,this is my second year.My live I am not to much interesant in my day off in studient,watch T.V,go to cinema,I go to look in my boyfriend,pratice to play basketball but my favorite sport is football.
    My principal objective is approved to the Batxillerat and to take out to make headway to the empresarial.

    Bye Maribel!!!!

    REVISED VERSION

    Hey Maribel!!

    My name is Miriam, I AM 17 years old,I__am A studient OF 1ST Batxillerat,this is my second year.My liFe IS NOT VERY INTERESTING. IN MY FREE TIME, I watch T.V, go to cinema, I go OUT WITH my boyfriend, play basketball but my favorite sport is football.
    My MAIN objective is TO PASS Batxillerat HAVE A GOOD MARK TO START BUSINESS STUDIES.

    Bye Maribel!!!!

    tHANK YOU MIRIAM, TRY TO CONCENTRATE ON BASIC STRUCTURES AND DO NOT TRANSLATE DIRECTLY FROM SPANISH INTO ENGLISH. KEEP PRACTISING, PLEASE

  2. Laura Domènech

    Hi everyone!
    I’m Laura Domènech and this is my firts publication in this blog. With this writting activity I’m going to write about myself and my hobbies.

    First, let me introduce myself. I’m 16 years old and I live in Piera. I was in E.A.Apiària since last yeard. Now I’m studing at IES Guinovarda the 1st year of the scientific “Batxillerat”. I’m very shy at beginning, but I thing that I’m less shy with the passage of the days. At the moment, I’m very happy with my new school and I like it so much. At first I was a bit scared, but now I see that it’s a great experience.

    About my hobbies I can tell that I love ridding hourse. Many Sundays I go to ride hourse. They are my favourite animal. I like very much heard house, techno and dance music but I really heard more types of music like. When I have freetime I spend it going to the disco with my friends, going to the gym and walk with them. At the moment I don’t know which career I’ll study in the future, but I hope in this two years I found it.

    Yesterday I win a price! Next Monday I have to do my first oral activity. I’m a bit nervous because I’ll be the first, but I’ll try to do it with the best way that I can.

    See you Tomorrow!
    xxoo

    Laura.

    CORRECTED VERSION
    Hi everyone!
    I’m Laura Domènech and this is my firST publication in this blog. With this wriTing activity I’m going to write about myself and my hobbies.

    First, let me introduce myself. I’m 16 years old and I live in Piera. I was in E.A.Apiària UNTIL last year…. Now I’m studYing at IES Guinovarda the 1st year of the scientific “Batxillerat”. I’m very shy at beginning, but I thinK that I’m less shy AS DAYS GO BY. At the moment, I’m very happy with my new school and I like it so much. At first I was a bit scared, but now I see that it’s a great experience.

    About my hobbies I can tell that I love HORSE RIDING. Many Sundays I go HORSE RIDING. They are my favourite animalS. I like very much LISTENING TO house, techno and dance music but I really HEAR more types of music like?????. When I have freetime I spend it going to the disco with my friends, going to the gym and walkING with them. At the moment I don’t know which career I’ll study in the future, but I hope I WILL KNOW IN this two years.

    Yesterday I wON a priZe! Next Monday I have to do my first oral activity. I’m a bit nervous because I’ll be the first, but I’ll try to do it …. the best way that I can.

    See you Tomorrow!
    xxoo

    NICE TEXT, DON’T WORRY ABOUT ORAL ACTIVITY IT’LL BE FINE!

  3. Alba Garcia

    Hello readers!
    This is my first writing exercise in which I will make a short description about myself.
    I’m Alba and I’m 16. I’m live in Piera but for fourteen years I leved in Vilanova del Camí. Because my parents are divorcied I come to Piera. My favorite colours is purple and blue sky. I’m a friendly girl. The subjects that are less like maths and physics because not give too well.
    This year I start high school science 1st. Why I chose this modality? Because I want to do studies releated to medicine, but I’m not sure that I will be. I’, between veterinary medicine, somethin releated to the laboratory or general medicine.
    My intencions for my future are pass the secondary school, pass the exam of selectivity and do one career.
    I hope English is not very necessary to speak it to medical career because I’m very shameful.

    See you soon!
    Alba
    xxx

    CORRECTED VERSION
    Hello readers!
    This is my first writing exercise in which I will make a short description about myself.
    I’m Alba and I’m 16. I—- live in Piera but for fourteen years I lIved in Vilanova del Camí. Because my parents are divorcEd I cAme to Piera. My favorite colours ARE purple and blue sky. I’m a friendly girl. The subjects that I LIKE less ARE maths and physics because I AM NOT VERY GOOD AT IT.
    This year I start high school science 1st. Why DID I CHOOSE this modality? Because I want to do studies relAated to medicine, but I’m not sure What I will be. I’AM between veterinary medicine, somethinG relAted to laboratory or general medicine.
    My intenTions for my future are passING the secondary school, passING the exam of selectivity and doING one career.
    I hope English is not very necessary to speak AT medical career because I’m very SHY.

    See you soon!
    Alba

    QUITE GOOD! KEEP ON WITH YOUR PRACTISE!

  4. María

    Hi, María here!
    Another 1st year ‘Bachillerato’ student. I’m 16 years old and I’ve been studying at IES Guinovarda since I was twelve. I haven’t had any problems in the institute so I hope that this year I can follow on in the same way.

    Besides learning all the school subjects I take German at the official school of languages in igualada. I go twice a week for two hours on Mondays and Wednesdays, and then every fifteen days I go for two hours on Fridays, which is only until January.

    I’ve got some hobbies, which are synchronised swimming and theatre.
    I do synchronised swimming on Saturdays and theatre on Tuesdays.
    Most people don’t think that synchronised swimming is a sport, but the truth is that they don’t realize how difficult it is.
    Before, I thought that synchronise swimming was more like a water dance, but it’s lots more than that. It’s training, hard work, the capacity to stay under water for long periods…
    I’ve been swimming since I was three and doing this sport since I was thirteen, so this will be my fourth year.
    We don’t take it too seriously, so we know we won’t get any where in competition but we have fun, enjoy it and do some useful exercise.

    Although this sport is fun, my real passion is theatre, I love acting. When I was younger I did theatre at school and last year I joined Piera theatre.
    My theatre class is not only about acting, It’s much more. I’ve learnt lots. And thanks to this activity I’ve met some wonderful people.

    Now you all know a bit more about me. I’ll keep other things for a future composition.

    See you!

    María.

    LOVELY TEXT, THANKS MARIA!

  5. Elizabeth

    Hi!
    I’m Elizabeth, I’m 16 and this year I started studying the 1st grade of the social “Batxillerat” at IES Guinovarda. And well, now I’m going to write a little bit about me, about my hobbies.
    I have played the piano for 8 years and I’ve played the saxophone too but only for 2 years when I was little. I did 7 years of musical language but I left it because I don’t want to be a musician, I only want to play the instruments that I like and enjoy them. So as you can see, my main hobby is music, I love to listen it and to play it.
    This year I’m searching for a theatre school and I hope that I’ll be able to start this years because to do theatre it’s a thing that I always wanted to do.
    And, for sure, another hobby that I have is going out with my friends.
    In the future i’d like to be a journalist, because I could write for a newspaper or a magazine(I like to write also!), I could work in the radio (with music all day, that would be fantastic!) or in TV.

    Elizabeth
    xoxo

    CORRECTED VERSION
    Hi!
    I’m Elizabeth, I’m 16 and this year I started studying the 1st grade of the social “Batxillerat” at IES Guinovarda. And well, now I’m going to write a little bit about mYSELF, about my hobbies.
    I have played the piano for 8 years and I’ve played the saxophone too but only for 2 years when I was little. I did 7 years of musical language but I left it because I don’t want to be a musician, I only want to play the instruments that I like and enjoy them. So as you can see, my main hobby is music, I love to listen TO it and to play it.
    This year I’m searching for a theatre school and I hope that I’ll be able to start this year… because DOING theatre IS a thing that I always wanted to do.
    And, for sure, another hobby that I have is going out with my friends.
    In the future I’d like to be a journalist, because I could write for a newspaper or a magazine(I like to write TOO!), I could work in the radio (with music all day, that would be fantastic!) or in TV.

    Elizabeth
    xoxo

    NICE TEXT!

  6. Elisa

    Hi, everybody!
    I’m Elisa and I’m 16. I’m studying “batxillerat” at IES Guinovarda. This is my first year at this high school, but before this year I already knew some friends and classmates.

    I don’t have a lot hobbIES, but in my free time I like hanging out with my friends. So far I played football in Piera but now a lot of the girls have left the team. I also like painting and swimming. Despite I’ve left playing football, I’ll try to go swimming more frequently to keep on practising sport.

    This year I’ll try to make an efforT to study more than in secondary because I don’t want to repeat.

    See you soon!
    Elisa
    xxx

    very good, Elisa!!

  7. Ariadna

    My name is Ariadna,I’m a 16 year old studient fron Guinovarda and this is my personal text for the blog. The teacher has asked us to write sometimes. My opinion is positive I believe that in this way we learn to write better.

    Today I write about me. My principal hobbies are: going out with friends, go to swimming pool and gym, go to cinema with friends and family. I like music a lot,but I don’t play any musical instruments,my favourite types of music are pop songs, also one of my other interests is sport and my favourite sport is football.
    In the school the more difficult subjects are geography and maths.

    My interesting word of the future: I want pass the batxillerat and the selectivity and do one career.

    yours sincerely: Ariadna

    CORRECTED VERSION

    My name is Ariadna,I’m a 16 year old studEnt AT Guinovarda and this is my personal text for the blog. The teacher has asked us to write sometimes. My opinion is positive I believe that in this way we learn to write better.

    Today I write about MYSELF. My MAIN hobbies are: going out with friends, goING to swimming pool and gym, goING to cinema with friends and family. I like music a lot,but I don’t play any musical instrument,my favourite types of music are pop songs, also one of my other interests is sport and my favourite sport is football.
    AT school the moST difficult subjects are geography and maths.

    My interesting word??????? of the future: I want TO pass “batxillerat” and the selectivity EXAM and do one career.

    GOOD WORK ARIADNA. LOOK AT THE CORRECTIOONS AND IF ANY DOUBT ASK ME, OK?

    yours sincerely: Ariadna

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