After correcting your letters of complaint, here you have some suggestions for similar future compositions:
- Letters of complaint are FORMAL LETTERS so don’t use contractions or informal structures.
- You should be polite, don’t use imperatives or modal verbs like must or have to. Use should/shouldn’t or conditionals.
- Organise your writing in DIFFERENT PARAGRAPHS.
- Have a look at the following chart:
| SALUTATION | Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sirs, |
Dear Mr Robinson,
Dear Mrs Hills, |
| ENDING | Yours faithfully, | Yours sincerely, |