Harry is Young. He is has 19 years. He’s got curly and Brown hair. He’s got green eyes.
He’s tall and strong. He’s a Singer. He has a tattoos.
His favorite color is orange. His favorite restaurant is TGI fridays.
His favorite perfume is Alien, of Thierry Mugler.
His favorite hard is 21, of Adele. His favorite movie is Love Actually, titanic…
His favorite shop is Selfridges. His favorite game is fifa.
His favorite food is popcorn.
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