Imagine it’s now three hours after Drysdale arrive at the judge’s house. Write the next chapter in the story. Use at least for linking words that sequence the events.
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In the house there aren’t anyone and Drysdale decided to enter to the house and haf a look in them, he was walking in the house, when que saw a boy,this boy was killed with a gun, Drysdale was very scared and he decided to return to his house, phone to the judge and wait for him, but in this moment the police arrives and they saw the murder. After this the judge arrives.
Drysdale decided to visit the judge’s home. There wasn’t anyone there, so he thought the judge was working and he hadn’t returned yet. Although Drysdale was an impatient man, he waited for the judge.
The gentleman arrived 1 hour later. He parked his car. Afterwards, he entered home. Our criminal tried to enter to the house, but the door was locked. However, Drysdale had practice lockpicking doors, so he entered easily.
Before entering to prison, Drysdale was a skilled thief, so he could move silently. The judge was sitting on the sofa while he was watching TV. As fast as possible, the criminal took his gun and killed the judge. Then he ran away. Beforehand, he wrote a note: REVENGE.
Aleix Seguí
07/07/2015
Drysdale decided to visit the judge home. There weren’t anyone there, so he thought that the judge was working and he hadn’t returned yet. Although Drysdale is an impatient man, he waited for the judge.
The gentleman arrived 1 hour later. He parked his car. Afterwards, he entered home. Our criminal tried to enter to the house, but the door was locked. However, Drysdale had practice lockpicking doors, so he entered easily.
Before entering to prison, Drysdale was a skilled thief, so he could move silently. The judge was sitting on the sofa while watching TV. As fast as possible, the criminal took his gun and killed the judge. Then he ran away. Beforehand, he wrote a note: REVENGE.
Aleix Seguí
07/07/2015
Three hours later, the police arrived in the house, and afterwards they check the judge house.
The police didn’t see any clue inside the house but when they went to the garden they saw a gun.
2 hours earlier Shaw went to the judge house, he tried to go inside the house but when he was in the garden, the big judge’s dog called Pitbull attacks him and he had to run a lot and he lost his gun.
Fortunately the judge was in the hairdresser.
While the police was going there, he saw a man in front of judge’s house. This boy was carrying a knife in his hand, so he started running to persue him, but the problem was that the man who carried a knife was faster than him, so he could not catch him. When the police arrive, the judge was died and the murderer wasn’t there.
Drysdale decided to visit the judge’s home. There wasn’t anyone there, so he thought the judge was working and he hadn’t returned yet. Although Drysdale was an impatient man, he waited for the judge.
The gentleman arrived 1 hour later. He parked his car. Afterwards, he entered home. Our criminal tried to enter to the house, but the door was locked. However, Drysdale had practice lockpicking doors, so he entered easily.
Before entering to prison, Drysdale was a skilled thief, so he could move silently. The judge was sitting on the sofa while he was watching TV. As fast as possible, the criminal took his gun and killed the judge. Then he ran away. Beforehand, he wrote a note: REVENGE.
Aleix Seguí
07/07/2015
When Drysdale entered to the house, there wasn’t anybody inside.
He started to look for the judge all around the house, and he finally find him dead in his bath.
Shaw had been there senconds ago, because he left a letter which said:
The death of this judge is the best thing that I will do in my life.
I only scape from the prison to kill this fake judge. If the police want to find me,
I will be in the Hide Park
One hour later judge phone Drysdale and he said that the prisoner wanted 1000 million. If he doesn’t have the money in two hours he will publish the top information that the police was heading for a lot of years.
Cliff at first didn’t know what he have to do, but at finally took the money and went to the prisoner’s house. There he listened the judge voice, he enter and give all the money to the prisoner. At the end arrived the police and arrested him.
While Drysdale was running into the house, he heard a whisper behind him. Before the person could reach him, he turned around himself and saw the criminal, Shaw. Afterwards, Drysdale took the gun and he shot. While Shaw was bleeding, he whispered his last words.
Ariadna
When Drysdale arrived at the judge’s house, the police cars were parked there and the door was open. After He entered and saw two police in the floor, they were killed. A few seconds, He heard a shout while he climbed the stairs to the second floor. Before his arrival he heard two shots and he ran. there he saw corpse the of Judge Adams and Shaw. If it had come before, the deaths could avoided.
Drysdale was waiting the police and they were surrouding the house, he heard noises and he saw a shoulder but he didn’t dare to enter. When the police arrived with a “megafon” they said to Shaw that he have to leave out but Shaw wanted money for the judge before he goes out site. The police want to look like heroes and they didn’t give the money to Shaw and they enter to the house to attack and Shaw killed the judge and at the end the police arrested Shaw.
While Drysdade was driving by the road to Judge Adams’ home, Shaw was running faster and arrived earlier.
After Shaw looked thought the windows and he saw light at the kitchen. Afterwards he rang but nobody opened. The Judge Adams listened to the Drysdale’ s missage and he leaved home beforehand.
Drysdale was arriving while the police was arresting Shaw because he wanted to go into the Judge Adam’ s house.