and the winner is…. Arnau Franquès!

The composition of this week has been really difficult. However, the winner this week is Arnau Franquès. Congratulations!

Remember that some mistakes are in bold. I’d like to know if you can solve them….

Fire!

Last summer, when I and my family came back home, we saw a fire in a house. The house was burning!

In the first place, we didn’t know do. Secondly, we decided to ring the firefighters. After 10 minutes, the firefighters hadn’t arrived yet, and at this moment I heard screaming. Therefore I told this to my friends.

After a while, two friends and I were in the house. Next, again we heard that screaming. I was on the second floor. As a result, I started to run upstairs. My friends follow me.  In the house it was very hot and to breath was very difficult. In the room there was a little child. I took the little boy out and ran downstairs.

Finally, the firefighters arrived. We were safe and this experience was amazing.

Arnau Franquès