I went to Loch Ness on holiday and I saw a monster. The monster was Nessie.Nessie was very ugly and she had big green eyes. She was very long too. Suddenly the monster roared. I run and went to the town and talked to people about the monster and the loch.
Pol Luengo 6A
Pol, there is a mistake. Check the past of ‘run’!!
Yes it’s true there is a mistake. The verbs run is in infinitive and your text is in the pasy