feelings
The moment I heard people clapping their hands and saw the curtain going down in front of all of us, I felt happy, relieved and moved. The actors started shouting and jumping, one of them gave me a big hug, all were laughing in happiness and pride of having done a great job. That was how a big project finished, A midsummer night’s dream finally came to an end and all our students had been great. I felt really good, tired and longing for a rest… but it was one of the happiest moments in my professional life…
Well, this is a short summary of what you have seen in class. You have heard my speech as an ice-breaker and example of what I am expecting you to do.
Choose a moment of your personal experience that you want to share with the rest of the class and tell us about it. After your oral performance you must write a short summary on the blog, post it as a comment and if any of your peers or myself want to give you our opinion, we will.
It can be the happiest, the saddest, the weirdest, the most frightening, the … moment of your life!
I’m going to explain one of the most happiest moments in my life. It was the 23rd of February and it was the day of my sixteenth birthday. Days before of my birthday I asked to my friends if they wanted to celebrate it with me, and almost all of them said to me that they had to do other things: study, spent time with the family…
So the day of my birthday, Saturday, I only met three of my friends: Clàudia, Marina and Judit. I went to Judit’s house and, there, her father said to us that we had to go to the garage to look for a box. I was the first and, when I opened the door of the garage all was dark and, in the end of the garage there were all my friends saying happy birthday to me. I was very nervous and also very happy becouse I love these things and becouse there were all my friends of the chilhood there.
Also it was all decorate and in the flour there was a heart of candles. They bought to me a cake with a photo of mine went I was three years old on it. Also, they bought to me a money box that it was a pig. They put a letter inside it and I only can read it if I break the pig, but they said to me that I only can do this went I’ll be thirty or forthy years old.
And… I’ll do it!
Sorry, I’m very very very late!
My most exciting moment in my life was on 3 September 2004. I was 13 years old, it was in summer and I didn’t start school.
In the morning my father woke up me and said me that we went out. I don’t remember what time was it, but I remember that I was very nervous abd a bit sleep. While we went to car I looked at my mum, she was very calm and my father too. It wasn’t as films that people goes runs, we went with all the calm of world.
We went to Barcelona and when we arrived to hospital, we went to a waiting room, the room was empty. I don’t know how much time we waited, but it looked like a eternity. Then a doctor entered to room and said that all was prepared and my mum went to him. My father and I went to a other room. My father was nervous now, he walked for the room all the time. I was bored and turned on the TV.
Hours later a nurse called us and we went at the end of passage. In the door of the operating room was and other nurse, I was exciting, nervous, I don’t believe it yet. The nurse brought my brother in her hands. He was purple ans he was shouting. It looked like that was the last day when my parents said me that my mum was pregnant and now my brother borned.
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THE most exciting moment in my life was on 3 September 2004. I was 13 years old, it was in summer and I HADN’T STARTED school.
In the morning my father woke ME up and TOLD ME TO GO out. I don’t remember what time IT was, but I remember that I was very nervous aNd a bit Asleep. While we went BY car I looked at my mum, she was very calm and my father too. It wasn’t as films WHERE people RUN, we went VERY RELAXED.
We went to Barcelona and when we arrived AT THE hospital, we went to a waiting room, the room was empty. I don’t know how LONG we waited, but it looked like aN eternity. Then a doctor entered THE room and said that all was prepared and my mum went WITH him. My father and I went to aNother room. My father was nervous now, he walked IN the room all the time. I was bored and turned on the TV.
Hours later a nurse called us and we went TO the end of CORRIDOR. On the door of the SURGERY room was another nurse, I was exciTED, nervous, I don’t believe it yet. The nurse brought my brother in her hands. He was purple anD he was shouting. It looked like IT was YESTERDAY when my parents TOLD me that my mum was pregnant and now my brother WAS born.
My most disappointing moment of my life.
Two years ago I was to manresa, to a competition of full contact. I and my team come to the place at ten o’clock in the morning, but the security officers didn’t leave us to enter until 12 a.m..
I took part in semi-contact the category and I won all the combats before the final.
In the final I started by losing, but mend the scoreboard but the refree indicate the end of the assault before the time. Later they arranged the mistake giving the first qualification to me and my oponent.
This day I won but it wasn’t a real victory for my.
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THE most disappointing moment of my life.
Two years ago I was IN Manresa, to a competition of full contact. I and my team cAme to the place at ten o’clock in the morning, but the security officers didn’t LET us —-enter until 12 a.m..
I took part in semi-contact the category and I won all the combats before the final.
In the final I started —- losing, but I mend the scoreboard but the refEree indicateD the end of the assault before the time. Later they arranged the mistake giving the first qualification to me and my oponent.
This day I won but it wasn’t a real victory for mE.
a one of the happiest moments in my life wer in the last summer when I and my football team, A.C. Baldrich, won the Piera football seven cup. This it isn’t a very important cup because only play temas from Piera, Hostalets, Masquefa and more tams near. But for us it is very important because is the first cup that we win and we demosstred to other people that we don’t are bad, so some people thinks this
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— one of the happiest moments in my life wAS — last summer when I and my football team, A.C. Baldrich, won the Piera football seven cup. This —– WASn’t a very important cup because THERE only play teAMs from Piera, Hostalets, Masquefa and more LOCAL TEAMS. But for us it WAS very important because IT is the first cup that we wOn and we SHOWED other people that we AREN’T bad, AS some people think—.
One of the best moment in my life, was this year, 13 of May, when I went with my friends Arnau, Gerard and my father to looked of the final of Copa del Rei to Valencia.
That day, we didn’t go to school because we went out at morning with a bus. We arrived at 3 o’clock and we ate ”paella”, it was so delicious! , and later we went with others people of Barcelona to concentration place of Futbol Club Barcelona fans. Later, in the stadium, the match was impresionant, it was very funny and we won the match and the trophy! We celebrated the trophy at Valencia’s streets, and later we went up the bus and we returned to Piera, we arrived the next day at morning.
I was very happy that day.
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One of the best momentS in my life was this year, ON 13TH of May, when I went with my friends Arnau, Gerard and my father to WATCH the final of Copa del Rei IN Valencia.
That day, we didn’t go to school because we went out IN THE morning BY bus. We arrived at 3 o’clock and we ate ”paella”, it was so delicious! , and later we went with other– people FROM Barcelona to THE MEETING POINT OF Futbol Club Barcelona fans. Later, in the stadium, the match was impresSIVE, it was very funny and we won the match and the trophy! We celebrated the trophy ON Valencia streets, and later we went ONTO the bus and we returned to Piera, we arrived the next day IN THE morning.
I was very happy that day.
I’m going to explain to you when Jessica and me went to take the driving test, the most nervious day in my life. I woke up at 9 o’clock and I met Jessica. We went to “Massapà” to have an energetic breakfast to get energy for all the morning. We went to the driving school and we met with Mary, who was our teacher of the theory part. We went by car to Vilafranca and then we were very nervious. Then we got in to a very big room with a lot of tables and we sat down. When we finished, we were more nervious than before because we had to wait until next day! But finally, we both passed the exam!
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I’m going to explain to you when Jessica and I went to take the driving test, the most nervious day in my life. I woke up at 9 o’clock and I met Jessica. We went to “Massapà” to have an energetic breakfast to get energy for all the morning. We went to the driving school and we met — Mary, who was our teacher of the theory part. We went by car to Vilafranca and then we were very nervOUs. Then we got inTO a very big room with a lot of tables and we sat down. When we finished, we were more nervOUs than before because we had to wait until next day! But finally, we both passed the exam!
I’m going to explain to you when I went to Isla Fantasia with some friends. The day didn’t start very well because we thought that we were lost. Finally we realized that we were in the right way.
There we got up in everything and we could repeat because these day there wasn’t a lot of people in the aquatic park.
At the afternoon, Alba and me went to some attraction while Cristina and Oriol stayed sitting on a bank because they felt a little bit ill. Alba and me turned in more than a half past hour.
Later, in the car, Cristina and me were very tired, then, we were sleeping while we came back to Piera.
This was one of my funniest days but there was some friends missing.
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I’m going to explain to you when I went to Isla Fantasia with some friends. The day didn’t start very well because we thought that we were lost. Finally we realized that we were On the right way.
There we got ON every RIDE and we could repeat because thAT day there wEREN’T a lot of people in the WATER park.
IN the afternoon, Alba and I went ON some attractionS while Cristina and Oriol stayed sitting on a bENCH because they felt a little bit ill. Alba and I CAME BACK AFTER half AN hour.
Later, in the car, Cristina and I were very tired, then, we were sleeping while we came back to Piera.
This was one of my funniest days but there wERE some friends missing.
I ‘m going to explain my happiest day of my life.
It was this summer when i went to London to saw Chris Brown’s concert with my friends.
It was very exiting and i enjoyed a lot.
One of my friend made reality one of my wishes , that it was know Chris brown.
That day ends amaizing.
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I ‘m going to explain THE happiest day of my life.
It was this summer when I went to London to sEE Chris Brown’s concert with my friends.
It was very exiting and I enjoyed a lot.
One of my friendS made reality one of my wishes , MEETING Chris brown.
That day ends amazing.??????
One of the happiest moments in my life was on 9th of October, when I went to spend the hole weekend in La Granada, a town near Vilafranca del Penedès. I stayed in a friend’s farm house with eleven people from “English Summer” summer camp. We’re very close friends, so for us, being there all together it was like a present, it was a one more chance to live the summer again. We play table football and table tennis and also there was a swimming pool, but I’d forgotten my bikini. The friend’s parents, cooked for us really great meals and we joined a lot those three days. I hope that we’ll meet very soon.
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One of the happiest moments in my life was on 9th of October, when I went to spend the hole weekend in La Granada, a town near Vilafranca del Penedès. I stayed in a friend’s farm house with eleven people from “English Summer” summer camp. We’re very close friends, so for us, being there all together —-was like a present, it was — one more chance to live the summer again. We playED table football and table tennis and also there was a swimming pool, but I’d forgotten my bikini. MY friend’s parents, cooked for us really great meals and we ENJOYED a lot those three days. I hope that we’ll meet very soon.
the most nervous moment in my life
Two years ago, I went with my school travelled to Italy. Our first visited Pisa, and I expected Pisa better. We finished to visit Pisa, we went to a restaurant. And we only had half minute to eat. We ran to the bus, becouse the bus hat to be in Florence at half past two. When we stayed in Florence we visited museum, Ponte Vechio, Plaza Señoria in one hour. I was very very nervious, and a bad day for me.
the most nervous moment in my life
Two years ago, I went with my school ON A TRIP to Italy. WE first visited Pisa, and I expected Pisa WOULD BE better. We finished visitING Pisa, we went to a restaurant. And we only had half A minute to eat. We ran to the bus, becAuse the bus haD to be in Florence at half past two. When we stayed in Florence we visited museum, Ponte Vechio, Plaza Señoria in one hour. I was very very nervious, and a bad day for me.
Four years ago, I was with my friends and we decided to go at abandoned house. we arrived there and it had a big garden. before we entered in the house we went around the house to see how it was. suddenly sara and abel saw a shade through the window of the house. We became very nervous and I wished to go away, but paco wanted to enter and finally he convened us.
We entered in the house through the windows of the bathroom.
All house was dark and tenebrous. We went to the hallway beforde we started to inspect the house when one of us said: shut up! and suddenly we heard a scream comming towards and for this reason we also started to scream and run for the house, finnaly we recognized the voices and it was paco, and other friends they wanted to joke us.
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Four years ago, I was with my friends and we decided to go INTO aN abandoned house. we arrived there and it had a big garden. before we entered —the house we went around the house to see how it was. suddenly sara and abel saw a shade through the window of the house. We became very nervous and I wished to go away, but paco wanted to enter and finally he convINCED us.
We entered –the house through the windows of the bathroom.
All THE house was dark and tenebrous. We went to the hallway before we started to inspect the house when one of us said: shut up! and suddenly we heard a scream comming towards and for this reason we also started to scream and run IN the house, finalLy we recognized the voices and it was paco, and other friends, they wanted to PLAY A joke ON us.
I’m going to explain you one of the most funny moments in my life.
It was three years ago when I went to Salou with my parents my sister and my cousin. In the first day my mother won three monkey toys in a tombola. While we were returning to the hotel, my father waved all the people in the street, that laughed a lot. My father wave at many chinese people in a bus that were sad because their holidays had finished. At the same time all of them started to wave him.
At night we met a friend and my sister, my cousin, he and I went to our room’s balcony with the monkey toys and a laser. There, hidden behind some towels we started to point everyone in the street. Some laughed a lot because when they looked at us, they could only see three monkey toys waving at them. But other people became very scared. Suddenly the security guard appeared and we pointed at him too. He got very angry because he couldn’t reconize us, he could only see the monkey toys. My parents saw everything and laughed a lot too.
The next day we saw that many people in the hotel brought the same monkey toys like ours and we couldn’t stop laughing.
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I’m going to explain TO you one of the FUNNIEST moments in my life.
It was three years ago when I went to Salou with my parents my sister and my cousin. On the first day my mother won three monkey toys in a tombola. While we were returning to the hotel, my father waved all the people in the street, WE laughed a lot. My father wave at many Chinese people in a bus that were sad because their holidays had finished. At the same time all of them started to wave AT him.
At night we met a friend and my sister, my cousin, he and I went to our room’s balcony with the monkey toys and a laser. There, hidden behind some towels we started to point AT everyone in the street. Some laughed a lot because when they looked at us, they could only see three monkey toys waving at them. But other people became very scared. Suddenly the security guard appeared and we pointed at him too. He got very angry because he couldn’t reconize us, he could only see the monkey toys. My parents saw everything and laughed a lot too.
The next day we saw that many people in the hotel brought the same monkey toys like ours and we couldn’t stop laughing.
The most beautiful moment in my life!
The last summer i went to Menorca. I flew alone, when i boarded the plane i felt very nervous and free because it was the first time that i flying alone. When i arrived to the airoport of Menorca my cousin waiting me.
Then we went to the house and later we went to the beach, and the night we went dinner to the Cal Font, Cal Font is a restaurant that is in the port in Menorca, you was dinner and you can see the fishes.
The next day we spent all the day at the beach, when we are staying together we are became very crayer and we jumping from the rocks in the water, and the eight we saw the sunset.
This is the most beautiful moment in my life, because my cousin and me i have a goos relationship and the last summer was the most beautiful!
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The most beautiful moment in my life!
—– last summer I went to Menorca. I flew alone, when I boarded the plane i felt very nervous and free because it was the first time that I WAS flying alone. When I arrived AT the airoport of Menorca my cousin WAS waiting FOR me.
Then we went to the house and later we went to the beach, and AT night we went TO HAVE dinner IN Cal Font, Cal Font is a restaurant that is in the port in Menorca, you HAVE dinner and you can see the fish.
The next day we spent all the day at the beach, when we WERE together we —- became very craZY and we jumpED from the rocks inTO the water, and AT — eight we saw the sunset.
This is the most beautiful moment in my life, because my cousin and I have a gooD relationship and last summer was the most beautiful!
The most hysterical moment of my life was two years ago, in summer, when my family and me went in a cruise of holidays. I had never gone in a cruise and I was very nervous because I was afraid that the ship to sink. My parents tried to calm me but I was hysterical because I was thinking about the film of titanic.
While I was going to the port of Barcelona by bus I realized that I had forgotten my ID card in my house. In this moment I already was desesperate!!
I didn’t know that to do because if I said to my parents, they would get angry with me. I dicided to explin it to my big brother but he couldn’t do anything and every time I was more nervous so I breathed and I went to explain it to my parents. My father got angry with me because he thought that I couldn’t rise to the ship without my ID card but luckly I only needed the passport.
Finally it was OK and I met a lot of people and I still speak with them. To go in a cruise is a very good experience to part of the first day!!
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The most hysterical moment of my life was two years ago, in summer, when my family and I went On a cruise oN holidays. I had never gone in a cruise and I was very nervous because I was afraid that the ship COULD sink. My parents tried to calm me but I was hysterical because I was thinking about the film of titanic.
While I was going to the port of Barcelona by bus I realized that I had forgotten my ID card in my house. In this moment I WAS already was desperated!!
I didn’t know What to do because if I said to my parents, they would get angry with me. I dEcided to explAin it to my big brother but he couldn’t do anything and every time I was more nervous so I breathed and I went to explain it to my parents. My father got angry with me because he thought that I couldn’t GET ON the ship without my ID card but luckly I only needed the passport.
Finally it was OK and I met a lot of people and I still speak with them. GOING 0n a cruise WAS a very good experience A part FROM the first day!!
This is one of my funniest days in my life:
It was three weeks ago, I think, a saturday, I met my friend Marcelo, and we went to the train. There, we met some special people. One of them, wan an old man who smells like nenuco, and other that was wearing a very short trousers, like a tanga. We laught a lot.
Later, we came out of the train in Gran Via 2. We was waiting a friend, Sandra. While we were waiting, we enter on a shop. When whe saw her, we hade in the shop, she didn’t saw us. She was looking for us, he phoned us and we told her that we was in front of her, we were joking and laughing a lot. When she found us, he wrandled(esbroncar) us very hard, but we continue laughing. She became angry and she didn’t spoke with us, but later, when we were waiting for another friend, Oscar, she hade with us to make a joke to Oscar. It was a very funny day.
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This is one of THE funniest days in my life:
It was three weeks ago, I think, a saturday, I met my friend Marcelo, and we went to the train. There, we met some special people. One of them waS an old man who smellT like nenuco, and ANother that was wearing a very short trousers, like a tanga. We laughED a lot.
Later, we came out of the train in Gran Via 2. We WERE waiting FOR a friend, Sandra. While we were waiting, we enterED a shop. When wheN saw her, we hID in the shop, she didn’t SEE us. She was looking for us, he phoned us and we told her that we wERE in front of her, we were joking and laughing a lot. When she found us, he wrandled(esbroncar) us very hard, but we continueD laughing. She became angry and she didn’t SPEAK TO us, but later, when we were waiting for another friend, Oscar, she hID with us to PLAY a joke to Oscar. It was a very funny day.
The happiest moment of my live was when I went to the caribe this summer with Lidia.
In the caribbe we went to the middle of the sea with a motor boat. when we were in the middle of the sea, we to get out of the motor boat. In the middle of the sea the wather only to come up for the waist. the water was very transparent and I can see th fishes inside the water. The water withouts waves.
And you could to bath with fishes and I took a starfish.When I took a starfish was a very nice experience for my.
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The happiest moment of my liFe was when I went to the CaribeEAN this summer with Lidia.
In the CaribbeAN, we went to the middle of the sea with a motor boat. When we were in the middle of the sea, we gOt out of the motor boat. In the middle of the sea the water only cAme up TO MY waist. the water was very transparent and I cOULD see fishes inside the water. The water without waves.
And you could bath with fishes and I took a starfish.When I took a starfish IT was a very nice experience for mE.
The most wonderful days of my life it was the last summer.I travelled to Málaga and I went to the Málaga’s festival with my boyfriend.
The festival was enormous.It had approximately one hundred fifty fair ground attraction in there ans a lot of stalls of diferents types of music.
Every day in the festival they did a concert in the night.One of de days my boyfriend and I went a heavy metal concert with his friends Jose,Dani and Isma.
That day in the afternoon we were in the festival because I wanted see the horses and the carriage.It was so beautiful.The one carriage had a some black horses.It was so cute.
Another days we went to the beach or to the field.
One day,we went to the beach but it was very far.We had cross a river and we climbed a rocks for arrive.The water,in the river,to reached up to my waist.We carried the bag and my boyfriend take in his head for not get wet.
The beach deserved the effort because it was so beautiful.
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The most wonderful days of my life WERE last summer.I travelled to Málaga and I went to Málaga’s festival with my boyfriend.
The festival was enormous.It had approximately one hundred fifty fairground attractionS in there anD a lot of stalls of diferent types of music.
Every day in the festival, they did a concert AT night.One of THE days my boyfriend and I went TO a heavy metal concert with his friends Jose,Dani and Isma.
That day in the afternoon, we were in the festival because I wanted TO see the horses and the carriageS. It was so beautiful.ONE carriage had ____ some black horses.It was so cute.
OTHER days we went to the beach or to the COUNTRYSIDE.
One day,we went to the beach but it was very far.We had TO cross a river and we climbed ___ rocks TO arrive.The water,in the river, reached up to my waist.We carried the bag and my boyfriend PUT IT ON his head SO AS not TO get wet.
The beach deserved the effort because it was so beautiful.
the moment that my feeling change more quickli were in the year 2006, in the season 2005/2006. i’m R.C.D.espanyol supporter, and in this season we arribed to the last match in the lasts places and i in this moment i was a boy without preocopations and i saw that my team can went to second division.This day i was very nervous ans more when the alaves scored because in this moment we are team of second division but in the las minut a boy with 20 years scored de goal with we were in first division.when i saw the players runing i started to jump and scream gool gol gol and since this moment i know that be espanyol supporter not are easy.
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the moment that my feeling changeD MOST quicklY wAS in the year 2006, in the season 2005/2006. I’m A R.C.D.espanyol supporter, and in this season we arriVed to the last match in the last places and in this moment I was a boy without preocUpations and I saw that my team COULD GO to second division.This day I was very nervous anD more when Alaves scored because in this moment we WERE A team of second division but in the lasT minutE a boy OF 20 years scored THE goal with WHICH we were in first division.when I saw the players runNing I started to jump and scream goAl goAL goAl and since this moment I know that beING espanyol supporter IS not easy.
In the 24 July I went to the car’s teoric examn. First I went up the bedroom and I wentto the driving school and later all pupils and two teachers went to Vilafranca. Afterwards when I arrived to Vilafranca I entered to the room. The room was very big and was distribuited in lines. I was very nervious but when I saw the exam I became quietly. When I finished the exam I went out the room and I returned to Piera.
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On 24th July I went to the driving theory exam. First, I got up in my bedroom and I went to the driving school and later all pupils and two teachers went to Vilafranca. Afterwards, when I arrived in Vilafranca, I entered the room. The room was very big and desks were set in lines. I was very nervious but when I saw the exam I became quiet and relax. When I finished the exam I went out of the room and I returned to Piera.
A happiest moment in my life!
Last sumer I went to Disneyland Resort Paris with my uncle and my aunt, my brother come with me too. My brother was so nervous, that the nigth before the trip, he couldn’t sleep but neither did I.
The flight was peaceful but my aunt was afraid of flying. I like flying, I love planes.
When we arrived to Paris, the weather was very good, it was sunny.
Disneyland Resort is for away from Paris so we took a private bus. When I was looking throush the window I saw a big balloon, it was yellow and red. My brother started to jump and I couldn’t believe it we were there.
The first thing that we did were visiting Pinochio’s house, the house was very beutiful, it was like the real story.
It was a fantastic day and we stayed there for four days.
I’ll never forget those days.
A happiest moment in my life!
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Last sumer I went to Disneyland Resort Paris with my uncle and my aunt, my brother CAME with me too. My brother was so nervous, that the nigHT before the trip, he couldn’t sleep but neither did I.
The flight was peaceful but my aunt was afraid of flying. I like flying, I love planes.
When we arrived IN Paris, the weather was very good, it was sunny.
Disneyland Resort is fAr away from Paris so we took a private bus. When I was looking throuGh the window I saw a big balloon, it was yellow and red. My brother started to jump and I couldn’t believe it, we were there.
The first thing that we did WAS visiting Pinochio’s house, the house was very beutiful, it was like the real story.
It was a fantastic day and we stayed there for four days.
I’ll never forget those days.
ONE OF THE MOMENTS OF MY LIFE
One of the most happiest moments of my life went when the Barça won the Madrid in the Bernabéu 2-6. I was in the bar of Hostalets when Madrid scored 1-0. I put very nervous because the Madrid superated our in the classification but later we drew 1-1 and then, we overcame and we won. When Piqué scored the six goal, I didn’t believe it and I celebrated to much. Thanks to this result the Barça won the league and Madrid was second. He is one of the most happiest moments because the next day I saw the Merengues’s face how Jesús and I laughed to much.
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ONE OF THE MOMENTS OF MY LIFE
One of the ____ happiest moments of my life WAS when — Barça won — Madrid in the Bernabéu STADIUM 2-6. I was in the bar IN Hostalets when Madrid scored 1-0. I GOT very nervous because Madrid WAS BETTER CLASSIFIED THAN US but later we drew 1-1 and then, we overcame and we won. When Piqué scored the sixTH goal, I didn’t believe it and I celebrated SO much. Thanks to this result — Barça won the league and Madrid was second. IT is one of the — happiest moments because the next day I saw the Merengues’s face, AS Jesús, and I laughed SO much.
On 30 April of this year I turned 18, abd my parents and my friends prepared me a surprise party. It made very strange because it had spent 8years since I saw my parents together, and hey agreed to the occasion. I won’t deceive you but it was clear they were going to make a surprise dinner, more than anything because I have friends who can’t hide. The point is that I get angry with my mother because these might I had with some friends to go an apartament on the seach in cubellas, but she phoned to my friends and told them that I didn’t go to apartament. She did that because shue was so exited, taht she expected the party finishes at 2am but finally the party finished at 12pm. It might be another silly example of why every day I thinks my family don’t as me before doing thinks. But anyway I finally went to a disco in Barcelona with some friends and everyyone was happy.
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On 30 April of this year I turned 18, aNd my parents and my friends prepared me a surprise party. It FELT very strange because it had BEEN 8 years since I saw my parents together, and They agreed to the occasion. I won’t deceive you but it was clear they were going to make a surprise dinner, more than anything because I have friends who can’t hide. The point is that I gOt angry with my mother because THAT NIGHT I had TO GO with some friends TO an aPpartament on the Beach in Cubellas, but she phoned to my friends and told them that I didn’t go to aPpartment. She did that because she was so exCited, tHat she expected the party finisheD at 2am but finally the party finished at 12pm. It might be another silly example of why every day I think my family don’t asK me before doing thinGs. But anyway I finally went to a disco in Barcelona with some friends and everyone was happy.
The best moment of my life was does three years, in the summer of the two thousand six.
My family and I were of holidays to Granada and Alicante. We were to Castillejar, a small village of Granada
My grandparents have in Granada a house-cave where go to happen the summers, the house is of the parents of my grandmother.
We were a week in the village.
In the street to heat,but in the swimming pool was well. We were to the beach, to the fair, to visit the city of Granada , la Alhambra and eat tapas.
The following week we were home of some familiar of my father that live in Alicante. They taught us Alicante and they invited us Terra mitica in Benidorm .Benidorm Was full of tourists and buildings were very high
We were to the beach of Alicante, but do not like me a lot because have a lot of rocks.
An the night we went to eat to different places. A night we were to eat octopus to a restaurant, but I didn’t eat a lot, because I does not like me a lot the octopus.
These have been my best holidays.
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The best moment of my life was three years AGO, in the summer of two thousand AND six.
My family and I were of holidays IN Granada and Alicante. We WENT to Castillejar, a small village of Granada
My grandparents have, in Granada, a house-cave where THEY go to SPEND the summers, the house is my grandmother’S PARENTS’.
We were a week in the village.
In the street IT WAS HOT, but in the swimming pool IT was GOODl. We WENT to the beach, to the fair, to visit the city of Granada , la Alhambra and eat “tapas”.
The following week we were AT home my father’S RELATIVE, WHO liveS in Alicante. They SHOWED us Alicante and they invited us TO Terra Mitica in Benidorm .Benidorm Was full of tourists and buildings were very high
We wENT to the beach of Alicante, but I DIDN’T like IT a lot because IT haS a lot of rocks.
AT night we went to eat to different places. ONE night we WENT to eat octopus to a restaurant, but I didn’t eat a lot, because I DON’T like octopus VERY MUCH.
These have been my best holidays.
The most exciting weekend of September 😉
Hi, people! 😀
Last weekend I went to the Palau Sant Jordi, to see a basketball match. A final basketball match! The teams which played were “DKV Joventut” from Badalona, and “FCRegalBarça” from Barcelona.
I went with my best friends and old basketball partners.
We are fanatics of basketball and we have never seen a final match. We only saw some basketball matches. What a exciting final!! The two best Catalan teams were fighting for the Catalonia cup! As we are a “professional basketball retired players” we could get a VIP tickets and we saw the match in front of the game. Can be a better form to see a basketball match?
Barcelona won the match without problems; I was celebrating the victory before the end of the match. It was a normal match with very good basketball and very good deportment.
In effect, I enjoy the experience with my friends more than the match. It’s when you feel so well, without problems, without concerns, without nerves… I was enjoying the time with my friends; the match was only an excuse to meet.
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The most exciting weekend of September 😉
Hi, people! 😀
Last weekend I went to the Palau Sant Jordi, to see a basketball match. A final basketball match! The teams which played were “DKV Joventut” from Badalona, and “FCRegalBarça” from Barcelona.
I went with my best friends and old basketball partners.
We are fanatics of basketball and we HAD never seen a final match. We only saw some basketball matches. What aN exciting final!! The two best Catalan teams were fighting for the Catalonia cup! As we are “professional basketball retired players” we could get VIP tickets and we saw the match in front of the game. Can THERE be a better form to see a basketball match?
Barcelona won the match without problems; I was celebrating the victory before the end of the match. It was a normal match with very good basketball and very good deportmeNT????.
In effect, I enjoy the experience with my friends more than the match. It’s when you feel so well, without problems, without concerns, without nerves… I was enjoying the time with my friends; the match was only an excuse to meet.
Hugs! And be happy!
Rafa
At the end of August, a birthday of a friend was coming soon, so my friends and I decided go to Mireia’s house for prepare the gifts to our friend. But of course, we had a big problem, and this was the birhday’s girl was with us, and of course, this was a surprise, so all we had to entertain for don’t suspected nothing.
For this, we played the singstar, and while she sang like a fool with one of us, the rest of us wrote the dedications of the postcard, which was part of her gift.
Luckily, she didn’t realize, but I thought that she suspicious anything, but she did as if she knew nothing, so everything was ok.
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At the end of August, a birthday of a friend was coming soon, so my friends and I decided TO go to Mireia’s house TO prepare the gifts FOR our friend. But of course, we had a big problem, and this was the birhday’s girl was with us, and of course, this was a surprise, so all we had to entertain HER SO THAT SHE WOULDN’T suspect ANYthing.
For this REASON, we played singstar, and while she WAS SINGING like a fool with one of us, the rest of us wrote the dedications of the BIRTHDAY CARD, which was part of her gift.
Luckily, she didn’t realize, but I thought that she suspECTED SOMEthing, but she did as if she knew nothing, so everything was ok.
I’m going to explain my most embarassing moment in my life. It was when my family and me went to Lanzarote last summer. We stayed in for one week and we visited a lot of places.
One of those places was Timamfaya. There my sister and me rode on a camel and i was so funny.
I was quite nervious but my sister more than me. Because she has got vertigo.
She was screaming all the time and I laughted a lot.
Aphotograph take as a photo while we were going on a cameland my sister was okey in the photo but I came out horrible.
Afterwards while I was getting down of the camel I fell to the floor and people laughted at me.
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I’m going to explain my most embarassing moment in my life. It was when my family and I went to Lanzarote last summer. We stayed THERE for one week and we visited a lot of places.
One of those places was Timamfaya. There my sister and I rode on a camel and iT was so funny.
I was quite nervious but my sister WAS more than me. Because she has got vertigo./ SHE HATES HEIGHTS.
She was screaming all the time and I laughted a lot.
A photographER tOOK Us a photo while we were going on a camel and my sister was okey in the photo but I came out horrible.
Afterwards, while I was getting down of the camel I fell to the floor and people laughed at me.
One of the days more exciting and emotive of my life, It was to arbitrate my first match of basketball. The previous day I was very nervous and could not sleeping thinking about the match. Want to do it of the best way possible, though it was my first match, because I’m a person of overcoming spirit. When I pass the night, the following day gave to me the clothes of arbitring and the whistle. Come the day, between to the track of match, the players were waiting for my presence and the anxious spectators in order that this match was beggining in that instant. I put in the way of the field to do extract initial, throwing the ball up, this moment was the exciting and emotive of my life, because many feelings lived together in an alone second. The match was neither the best not the worst, but if that takes a great recollection to me.
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One of the MOST EXCITING AND MOVING days of my life was WHEN I UMPIRED my first BASKETBALL match . The previous day I was very nervous and could not SLEEP thinking about the match. I WANTED to do it the best way possible, though it was my first match, because I’m a person of overcoming spirit. When THE NIGHT WENT BY, the following day I PUT ON MY REFEREE UNIFORM and the whistle. ????????Come the day, the anxious spectators AND the players were waiting for ME ON THE BASKETBALL COURT TO BEGING this match in that instant. ????????????I put in the way of the field to do extract initial, throwing the ball up, this moment was the MOST exciting and emotive of my life, because many feelings lived together in ONE second. The match was neither the best nor the worst, but It IS GREAT MEMORY..
I’m going to explain the funniest moment in my life.
Two years ago, the Roller Skating Club gave us a little present: we went to Skating in order to spend a good time altogether.We met in Piera and then we went to Barcelona. When we arrived we had breakfast. Then we took ice skates, we put our gloves and finally we entered to the ice rink and we started to skate. At first we tried to skate as well as posible but we fell down repeatedly and for this reason we laughed a lot. Our parents did the same and they tried to skate too ( an appointment was that one father who tired to skate fell down and he broke his arm.) At midday we were so tired and after had luch we returned to Piera.
In conclusion it was a really good experience.
I‘m going to explain the funniest moment in my life.
Two years ago, the Roller Skating Club gave us a little present: we went ….. skating in order to spend a good time altogether.We met in Piera and then we went to Barcelona. When we arrived, we had breakfast. Then we took ice skates, we put our gloves ON and finally we entered …. the ice rink and we started to skate. At first, we tried to skate as well as posible but we fell down repeatedly and for this reason we laughed a lot. Our parents did the same and they tried to skate too (an appointment???? (WHAT DO YOU MEAN, AN ACCIDENT?) was that one father who TRIED to skate, fell down and he broke his arm.) At midday we were VERY tired and after LUNCH we returned to Piera.
In conclusion it was a really good experience.
I explain some moments of my life that are happiest.
One of them, is when I went to Water World, which is a water park,that is in Lloret de Mar. I went with my boyfriend, my best friend and her boyfriend.
Other day, with them, we went to Port Aventura, and the truth is that this was the first time had gone.
Another day, I went to a Rally with my boyfriend, his sister and her boyfriend. We went two days and we sleeped in a tent.
I have much happiest day of my life but I can’t explain more because I don’t have more time.
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I’LL explain some moments of my life that are THE happiest.
One of them, is when I went to Water World, which is a water park, ——- in Lloret de Mar. I went with my boyfriend, my best friend and her boyfriend.
ANother day, ——- we went to Port Aventura, and the truth is that this was the first time I WENT THERE.
Another day, I went to a Rally with my boyfriend, his sister and her boyfriend. We went FOR two days and we SLEPT in a tent.
IT WAS THE happiest day of my life but I can’t explain more because I don’t have more time.
I’m going to explain the most satisfaction day in my life. We arrived at sportcenter at eight o’clock, because we had to prepare us. We were very nervous, because we prepared this festival very hard… We weard us clothes, we made up, and the lights turned off. All the people clapped, and the music started. We did all the dance without any mistake.
This festival was about “Cat’s musical”, and the songs, the decorate and all the things, was great. All people, was very happiest, and us too, because us propost was done.
I have done a lot of festivals in mi live, but this it was one of the best, for this, this day was the most satisfaction day in mi life.
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I’m going to explain the most satisfactORY day in my life. We arrived at THE sportS center at eight o’clock, because we had to prepare (GET READY). We were very nervous, because we HAD prepared this festival very hard… We PUT ON OUR clothes, we PUT ON SOME MAKE UP, and the lights turned off. All the people clapped, and the music started. We did all the dance without any mistake.
This festival was about “Cat’s musical”, and the songs, the SET and all the things, WERE great. All people, WERE very happY, and SO WERE WE, because OUR proposAL was done.
I have done a lot of festivals in mi liFe, but this__ was one of the best, for this, this day was the most satisfactORY day in mi life.